[Set] Etastic Control [6/?]

[Seta]

[center]Okay, most of you might've never seen my cards, which is not a surprise, looking at the fact that I rarely make them, and haven't made them in like a year. Now I decided to revive my old beginning of a set. I aim to make creative cards with creative effects, either long or short, so I don't want you to complain that the effects are too long etc. Without further intro;

[spoiler=EN001, Etastic Gravelor Zaghr]
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This card cannot be removed from play. If this card is in your Graveyard, as long as there is a DARK monster on the field, keep this card on top of your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, if this card is the top card of your Graveyard, by paying 500 Life Points, you can destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is the only card of your Graveyard, return this card to your Deck. The Deck is then shuffled.[/size][/spoiler]
[spoiler=EN002, The Etastic Overlord, Mortuus Immortalis]
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This card can only be Synchro Summonned by removing from play 1 "Etastic Tuner" on the top of your Graveyard and 1 Level 6 non-Tuner Etastic monster from your hand. Once per turn, during eather players Main Phase, if the top card of your opponent's Graveyard is a Monster, you can Special Summon it to your side of the field. The Special Summoned monster is treated as a Etastic monster and gains 500 ATK.[/size][/spoiler]
[spoiler=EN009, Etastic Tuner]
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Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can roll a six-sided die and select 1 monster in your Graveyard with a Level equal to the result and move it on the top of your Graveyard.[/size][/spoiler]
[spoiler=EN010, Etastic Eye]
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You can Special Summon this card from your hand if the top card of your Graveyard is a DARK monster. You can remove from play this face-up card to select 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your Deck and move it on top of your Graveyard.[/size][/spoiler]
[spoiler=EN011, Etastic Lust]
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You can only activate this card when your opponent declares a direct attack with a monster when the top card of your Graveyard is a DARK Etastic monster. Special Summon the top card of your Graveyard to face-up Defense Position on your field. It's DEF is halved. After the turn you activate this card, remove from play the Special Summoned monster ignoring it's effects.[/size][/spoiler]
[spoiler=EN012, Etastic Gravemaster]
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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 face-up Etastic monsters you control. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card in your hand to Special Summon the top card of your Graveyard. It's ATK is halved. You can only use this effect if the top card of your Graveyard is a DARK monster. If this card is the top card of your Graveyard, it is treated as a DARK monster.[/size][/spoiler]

Will keep updated as I progress.[/center]

[Althemia]

1st Card OCG Fix:
This card cannot be removed from play. If this card is in your Graveyard, as long as there is a DARK monster on the field, keep this card on top of your Graveyard. [s]Once per turn,[/s] [s]d[/s][b]D[/b]uring your Standby Phase, if this card is the top card of your Graveyard, [s]by paying[/s] [b]you can pay[/b] 500 Life Points[s], you can[/s] [b]to[/b] destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is the only card [s]of[/s] in your Graveyard, return this card to [s]your[/s] [b]the[/b] Deck. [s]The Deck is then shuffled.[/s]

Considering how you haven't made cards in at least a year or so, judging by what you said, I'd say the 1st card is reasonably good for the purpose you've made it. Foolish Burial + This = <3

But yeah, I like the 1st card quite a lot.

2nd Card OCG Fix:
[b]1 "Etastic" Tuner + 1 Level 6 "Etastic" non-Tuner monster[/b]
This card can only be Synchro Summonned by removing from play [s]1 "Etastic Tuner" on the top of your Graveyard and 1 Level 6 non-Tuner Etastic monster[/s] [b]the correct Synchro Materials[/b] from your hand. Once per turn, during e[s]a[/s][b]i[/b]ther player's Main Phase, if the top card of your opponent's Graveyard is a Monster, you can Special Summon it to your side of the field. The Special Summoned monster is treated as a[b]n[/b] [b]"Etastic"[/b] monster and gains 500 ATK.

I feel that this could actually be OP? I dunno, I feel that the Special Summoning is just a bit much? It's Monster Reborn on steroids, really. Get rid of the ATK gaining part and make it so it can't attack? Idk. Just tone it down a bit.

I'll post more critiques later, when I can be bothered to do so.

[Seta]

[quote name='+Kokonoe' timestamp='1283615591' post='4598838']
1st Card OCG Fix:
This card cannot be removed from play. If this card is in your Graveyard, as long as there is a DARK monster on the field, keep this card on top of your Graveyard. [s]Once per turn,[/s] [s]d[/s][b]D[/b]uring your Standby Phase, if this card is the top card of your Graveyard, [s]by paying[/s] [b]you can pay[/b] 500 Life Points[s], you can[/s] [b]to[/b] destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is the only card [s]of[/s] in your Graveyard, return this card to [s]your[/s] [b]the[/b] Deck. [s]The Deck is then shuffled.[/s]

Considering how you haven't made cards in at least a year or so, judging by what you said, I'd say the 1st card is reasonably good for the purpose you've made it. Foolish Burial + This = <3

But yeah, I like the 1st card quite a lot.

2nd Card OCG Fix:
[b]1 "Etastic" Tuner + 1 Level 6 "Etastic" non-Tuner monster[/b]
This card can only be Synchro Summonned by removing from play [s]1 "Etastic Tuner" on the top of your Graveyard and 1 Level 6 non-Tuner Etastic monster[/s] [b]the correct Synchro Materials[/b] from your hand. Once per turn, during e[s]a[/s][b]i[/b]ther player's Main Phase, if the top card of your opponent's Graveyard is a Monster, you can Special Summon it to your side of the field. The Special Summoned monster is treated as a[b]n[/b] [b]"Etastic"[/b] monster and gains 500 ATK.

I feel that this could actually be OP? I dunno, I feel that the Special Summoning is just a bit much? It's Monster Reborn on steroids, really. Get rid of the ATK gaining part and make it so it can't attack? Idk. Just tone it down a bit.

I'll post more critiques later, when I can be bothered to do so.
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Ehh, most of the OCG fixes you made were converting my old OCG to new lol =P I still like using the old one

And I thought the 2nd card was UP lol

[Seta]

Bump =/

[JG.]

Yayz, you used some of my ideas =D Nice cards, CBB to give an indepth review though.

[Seta]

Bump =/
What's with people not checking sets anymore?
Gonna add a few extra cards today.