Overpowered cards? What do you think!?

[gatsumoro]

These are some new cards I made, I already know they are OP'd, but I would like to show them to the Forum.


[img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/1696/165631.jpg[/img]

Effect:
This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 5 monsters you control (you can't Set this card). This card's Summon cannot be negated. Spell and Trap cards cannot be activated in the turn this card was Summoned in. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to your Life Points x2. Any damage this card deals to your opponent is halved. If you have 1000 Life Points or less, destroy this card.

Picture by [b]Gargant[/b] on deviantArt


[img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/1696/165631.jpg[/img]

Effect:
The Fusion Material Monsters for this card are any 6 DARK or LIGHT Dragon-Type monsters. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects that specifically target this 1 card. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove from play all cards in your Graveyard and your hand to Special Summon this card during the End Phase of the turn it was destroyed in.

Dunno who made the picture :/


[img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/1696/165631.jpg[/img]

Effect:
This card cannot be Special Summoned. Pay 700 Life Points during each of your End Phases. If you do not, destroy this card. Raise this card's ATK by 1000 points during each of your Standby Phases. If this card is in your Graveyard, you can pay half of your Life Points, remove from play 5 Monster Cards from your Deck and discard all cards from your hand to add this card to your hand.

Picture by [b]the Undone Man[/b] on deviantArt


[img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/1696/165631.jpg[/img]

Effect:
1 Beast-Type monster + 1 Aqua-Type monster + 1 Pyro-Type monster
This monster can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon. When this card is Fusion Summoned, destroy all face-up monsters your opponent controls, then, inflict 500 Damage to your opponent's Life Points for each monster destroyed by this effect.

I lol at this card
Picture by [b]xSheepi[/b] on deviantArt


[img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/1083/165631i.jpg[/img]

Effect:
While this card is face-up on the field, every time a monster's ATK or DEF is raised or decreased, destroy it. Once per turn, you can discard 4 cards from your hand and remove from play 2 cards from your Graveyard to decrease the ATK and DEF of 1 monster on the field by 500. This card's ATK or DEF cannot be raised or decreased.

Picture by [b]el Grimlock[/b] on deviantArt, I think


[img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/1696/165631.jpg[/img]

Effect:
When this card is Normal Summoned, discard 1 DARK monster from your hand. Once per turn, you can discard 1 DARK monster from your hand to Special Summon 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard whose Level is lower than the discarded monster's Level. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can send 1 DARK monster from your Deck to your Graveyard to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard.

Complete Graveyard control with this card
Picture by [b]JasonEngle[/b] on deviantArt


[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/633/165631h.jpg[/img]

Effect:
This card is also treated as a Thunder-Type monster while it is face-up on the field. Once per turn, you can activate one of the following effects when this card declares an attack:
1. Destroy the target monster without applying Damage calculation
2. Destroy 1 Spell or Trap card your opponent controls
3. Return this card to your hand and take Damage equal to this card's ATK.

I don't really think this card is too much OP'd, but if it was relased, it would be banned in a week ^^
Picture by [b]JasonEngle[/b] on deviantArt


And, finally, for the end, my trumph card of all of mine OP'd cards....

[img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/8273/165631o.jpg[/img]

Lolz at the description, anyone?
This card's name is Latin for "Evil Immortal", I think
Picture by [b]unbeliever666[/b] on deviantArt

I hope you liked them, and I hope you lol'd at "Ultimate Polar Bear..."

^^

[Goldeneagle]

Not quite as OPed as I was fearing, some quite balanced summoning conditions, just watch out for self contradictory effects; the 'can't be special summoned except by fusion summon' effect of LD Lord negates its last effect. Obviously a lot of room for improvement, but at least you recognise their OPedness which is good for a newbie.

[gatsumoro]

[quote name='goldeneagle' timestamp='1283625427' post='4599630']
Not quite as OPed as I was fearing, some quite balanced summoning conditions, just watch out for self contradictory effects; the 'can't be special summoned except by fusion summon' effect of LD Lord negates its last effect. Obviously a lot of room for improvement, but at least you recognise their OPedness which is good for a newbie.
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lol, ty for mentioning the effect of dragon lord, i forgot about it's effect! i made it a few months ago, around 11:30 PM so i wasnt really thinking about it ill change it when i find some time
also, ty for support with words! means a lot to a noob like me ^^

[.Cpt Awesome]

You know, the last one is a Ritual Monster with a lore of a Normal Monter. You might want to change that. But I see you put effort on them, they aren't bad.

Cpt Awesome

[gatsumoro]

[quote name='.Cpt Awesome' timestamp='1283626747' post='4599722']
You know, the last one is a Ritual Monster with a lore of a Normal Monter. You might want to change that. But I see you put effort on them, they aren't bad.

Cpt Awesome
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Yeah, the last one is supposed to be like Obelisk, Slifer or Ra in the manga and the anime (I know there already are Obelisk and Ra effect monsters). It wasnt supposed to be a Ritual Monster, I just chose the blue color of the background because it matches with the pic. Ty a lot for replying and "Awesome"

[.Cpt Awesome]

Hmm, I got it
Nice pics by the way.

Awesome