crossader Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 [color="#800080"][size="3"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]I just thaught on some idea right now. This is a Dragoon Knight.[/b][/font][/size][/color] [Spoiler="Zero Knight Dragoon"][img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/2448/77742p.jpg[/img] [color="#8B0000"][font="Arial Black"][b]During your Main Phase, if your opponent controls a Dragon-Type monster, you can remove this face-up card you control from play. If this card is removed from play by it's own effect, Special Summon it when your opponent declares an attack with a Dragon-Type monster. When this card is Special Summoned this way, this card's ATK becomes doubled until the end of your next Battle Phase.[/b][/font][/color][/Spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 [center][size="6"]Omegas Rating Rants[/size] Congrats! You get my first full-sized rating in over 4 months! You should feel happy. (OCG Fix) During your Main Phase if your opponent controls a Dragon-Type monster, you can remove from play this face-up card. If this card is removed from play by its own effect, Special Summon it when your opponent declares an attack with a Dragon-Type monster. When you do, this cards ATK is doubled until the end of your next Battle Phase. (Ratings) Picture - 1/2 OCG - 1/2 Uniqueness - 1/2 Balance - .5/2 Total - 3.5/8 Grade - C+ (Review) The picture is alright for what it's intended for, but I just didn't like it much. It might just be my eyes, but it seems blurry to me. Your OCG is alright, but as you can read above, it needs improvement. I don't think your user title very much fits anymore. I give you unique points for an Anti-Dragon card. Something we don't see often anymore. However, it is also the typical overpowered Anti-Type/Attribute/Meta card everyone makes for various reasons. If your opponent attacks with a Dragon, you get a 3600 powerhorse attacker until the end of your next Battle Phase. That's some pretty messed up stuff. Maybe change it to ending the Battle Phase rather than doubling its ATK outright. I do OCG corrections. If you or anyone else reading this needs any help, just send me a Private Message and i'll get to it when I can.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crossader Posted September 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 [color="#800080"][size="3"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]mmmm i was actually looking a powerfull kick-ass style warrior monster as Dragoon Knights are for Dragons, but you got a point there. I will fix the OCG and i will drop his ATK so i believe it will be more balanced.[/b][/font][/size][/color][color="#800080"][size="7"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]FIXED[/b][/font][/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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