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Bronzegoldquake

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[color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][i]*Credit to HP DOOM for the images.[/i][/font][/color]
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[font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1C2837"][b]Lore: During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can pay 500 life points to Special Summon 1 lvl 3 or lower Beast Type Monster from your Graveyard to the Field. [/b][/color][/font]
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[font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1C2837"]This card isn't that original but I like it :P. [/color][/font]
[font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1C2837"]I probably need OCG corrections and tell me if you think it is OPED.[/color][/font]

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Sweet picture you've got in there. I think you could change the level to 6, because 5 doesn't seem to fit the card. And... Wouldn't the whole first effect be reduced to "This card does Piercing Damage"? I don't know, but it would make the effect shorter (I prefer those), and more simple.

[b]8/10[/b]


Awesome ;)

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[quote name='.Cpt Awesome' timestamp='1283644689' post='4600742']
Sweet picture you've got in there. I think you could change the level to 6, because 5 doesn't seem to fit the card. And... Wouldn't the whole first effect be reduced to "This card does Piercing Damage"? I don't know, but it would make the effect shorter (I prefer those), and more simple.

[b]8/10[/b]


Awesome ;)
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Thanks for commenting :) Is Piercing Damage acceptable now?

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