Bronzegoldquake Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 [color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][i]*Credit to HP DOOM for the images.[/i][/font][/color] [i][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1C2837"][img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/2029/274409.jpg[/img][/color][/font][/i] [i][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"] [/font][/i] [font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1C2837"][b]Lore: During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can pay 500 life points to Special Summon 1 lvl 3 or lower Beast Type Monster from your Graveyard to the Field. [/b][/color][/font] [font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1C2837"][b] [/b][/color][/font] [font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1C2837"]This card isn't that original but I like it . [/color][/font] [font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1C2837"]I probably need OCG corrections and tell me if you think it is OPED.[/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Cpt Awesome Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 Sweet picture you've got in there. I think you could change the level to 6, because 5 doesn't seem to fit the card. And... Wouldn't the whole first effect be reduced to "This card does Piercing Damage"? I don't know, but it would make the effect shorter (I prefer those), and more simple. [b]8/10[/b] Awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronzegoldquake Posted September 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 [quote name='.Cpt Awesome' timestamp='1283644689' post='4600742'] Sweet picture you've got in there. I think you could change the level to 6, because 5 doesn't seem to fit the card. And... Wouldn't the whole first effect be reduced to "This card does Piercing Damage"? I don't know, but it would make the effect shorter (I prefer those), and more simple. [b]8/10[/b] Awesome [/quote] Thanks for commenting Is Piercing Damage acceptable now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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