A couple of new basic monsters

[theqman]

some basic monsters that i created, i know they are not much but they could be used in a deck or something.
[img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/6898/276407.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/7607/276407v.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/6614/276407q.jpg[/img]
so yea comment if u want

[.Cpt Awesome]

Okay... In the first card, the picture is totally blurred, hard to see, and even if it wasn't, it's real life-like, not YGO'ish. You should also capitalizate the name of your cards. It's written "Fairy", not "Fary", and "Creature" isn't a real type. The first card is supposed to be a Vanilla like the other two, since it has no effect and a lore. The other two are plenty ok, but you should change the Type to Warrior, I think, or Beast Warrior, or anything real.

So yeah, not trying to be harsh, hope you understand and try to improve.


Awesome

[CARLCGL]

[color="#4B0082"]well, fails mentioned above >,>

if you going to make a spirit monster must to have at least the effect that they return to the hand in the end phase of the turn they summoned, i think

I don't think that there are people that need vanillas, at least vanillas without support to vanillas[/color]

[theqman]

[quote name='.Cpt Awesome' timestamp='1283648257' post='4600978']
Okay... In the first card, the picture is totally blurred, hard to see, and even if it wasn't, it's real life-like, not YGO'ish. You should also capitalizate the name of your cards. It's written "Fairy", not "Fary", and "Creature" isn't a real type. The first card is supposed to be a Vanilla like the other two, since it has no effect and a lore. The other two are plenty ok, but you should change the Type to Warrior, I think, or Beast Warrior, or anything real.

So yeah, not trying to be harsh, hope you understand and try to improve.


Awesome
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thanks for the help ill try to improve

[quote name='CARLCGL' timestamp='1283651413' post='4601127']
[color="#4B0082"]well, fails mentioned above >,>

if you going to make a spirit monster must to have at least the effect that they return to the hand in the end phase of the turn they summoned, i think

I don't think that there are people that need vanillas, at least vanillas without support to vanillas[/color]
[/quote]
can u explain to me more about vanillas cuz im new to this stuff lol

[.Cpt Awesome]

Vanillas = Normal Monsters (Without any effect). He was saying that you should make some support for them, because Vanillas are pretty much useless without support.