DarkSaint Posted September 5, 2010 Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 Hello,this is my second card deck,Hell Rider card deck,please comment and give me some advises,thank.Thank for advises,i will improve it and sorry for bad english. Characteristic of Card Deck:Send zombie monster card to graveyard to active monster effect,and the monster card been send to graveyard have its own effect too,that is mean it will have a double effect. [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/4236/279002r.jpg[/img][img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/444/279002h.jpg[/img][img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/8105/279002v.jpg[/img][img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/9581/279002.jpg[/img][img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/1113/279002d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/4906/279002l.jpg[/img][img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/9581/279002.jpg[/img][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/7710/279002f.jpg[/img] [img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/9581/279002.jpg[/img][img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/4382/279002ti.jpg[/img][img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/2440/279002a.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted September 5, 2010 Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 IMO these should be moved to be moved to Pop Culture because they reference 2 of the 4 horseman fairly clearly. They should be Zombie-types, your OCG needs work. Otherwise, not horrible for a noob. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted September 5, 2010 Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 Overpowered. Undead is not a Type. Once per turn, discard 1 card from your hand. This card gains 500 ATK until the End Phase. Pretty bland. Overpowered cuz you can easily get it to 2400, and would cause even more hell with Dark World. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkSaint Posted September 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 Thank for comment,i will improve it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted September 13, 2010 Report Share Posted September 13, 2010 Since Im a SMT fan 2 I'll help with this set, I better get a Rep 4 this, JK u dont hav 2. 1st lets start with OCG (original card grammar) meaning try 2 copy the context of a real card to make the card your creating seem more realistic. If you still dont know how it's ok alot of people make OCG mistakes, as long as ppl can understand the card's effect then your fine. Here I'll fix your card's OCG and you'll c how much cleaner, reallistic ur cards would look like. "Red Rider" - Once per turn, you can select 1 Zombie-Type monster with 500 or less ATK from your Deck and add the selected card to your hand. After activating this card's effect, this monster cannot declare an attack this turn. "White Rider"- Once per turn, you can tribute 1 Zombie-Type monster you control to destroy 1 Spell/Trap Card on your opponent's side of the side. When you activate this card's effect halve this monster's ATK and DEF, this monster can now attack you opponent's life points directly during this turn. "Pale Rider"- Once per turn, you can discard 1 Zombie-Type monster from your hand to increase this card's ATK by 500 until the End Phase. "Black Rider"- Once per turn, you can tribute 1 Zombie-Type monster you contol to inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. "Trumperteer"- This card can only be Special Summoned if you have "Black Rider", "Pale Rider", White Rider", "Red Rider" in your Graveyard. You can only 1 "Turmperteer" can be on the field. The contoller of this card cannot a normal draw on their Draw Phase. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 life points to select 3 Zombie-Type monsters from your Graveyard and add them to your hand. Once per turn, During your Main Phase you can discard all the cards in your hand. "The Trouble From Hell"- If this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard. Your opponent takes 500 points of damage. "The Hand From Hell"- If this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard. Your opponent must discard 1 card from his/her hand. "The Strength From Hell'- If this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard. Increase the ATK of all monsters your control by 500 until the End Phase. I did this kinda quickly If I made Spelling mistake PM me I'll fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted September 13, 2010 Report Share Posted September 13, 2010 [quote name='LRPXD' timestamp='1284397728' post='4623782'] Since Im a SMT fan 2 I'll help with this set, I better get a Rep 4 this, JK u dont hav 2. 1st lets start with OCG (original card grammar) meaning try 2 copy the context of a real card to make the card your creating seem more realistic. If you still dont know how it's ok alot of people make OCG mistakes, as long as ppl can understand the card's effect then your fine. Here I'll fix your card's OCG and you'll c how much cleaner, reallistic ur cards would look like. "Red Rider" - Once per turn, you can select 1 Zombie-Type monster with 500 or less ATK from your Deck and add the selected card to your hand. After activating this card's effect, this monster cannot declare an attack this turn. "White Rider"- Once per turn, you can tribute 1 Zombie-Type monster you control to destroy 1 Spell/Trap Card on your opponent's side of the side. When you activate this card's effect halve this monster's ATK and DEF, this monster can now attack you opponent's life points directly during this turn. "Pale Rider"- Once per turn, you can discard 1 Zombie-Type monster from your hand to increase this card's ATK by 500 until the End Phase. "Black Rider"- Once per turn, you can tribute 1 Zombie-Type monster you contol to inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. "Trumperteer"- This card can only be Special Summoned if you have "Black Rider", "Pale Rider", White Rider", "Red Rider" in your Graveyard. You can only 1 "Turmperteer" can be on the field. The contoller of this card cannot a normal draw on their Draw Phase. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 life points to select 3 Zombie-Type monsters from your Graveyard and add them to your hand. Once per turn, During your Main Phase you can discard all the cards in your hand. "The Trouble From Hell"- If this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard. Your opponent takes 500 points of damage. "The Hand From Hell"- If this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard. Your opponent must discard 1 card from his/her hand. "The Strength From Hell'- If this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard. Increase the ATK of all monsters your control by 500 until the End Phase. I did this kinda quickly If I made Spelling mistake PM me I'll fix it. [/quote] Necrobump lol it's all good, I did the same thing a few days ago. YCM still has a few bugs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moppmoppmopp Posted September 13, 2010 Report Share Posted September 13, 2010 Unholy judgement is op'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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