McHotcakes Posted September 5, 2010 Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 Here is my first complete deck. And for anyone thinking about complaining because I have normal monsters I'd just like to let you know that I would rather make a normal monster then give a character an effect that doesn't make any sense so :-P [spoiler=Kards][spoiler=Normal Mosters] [spoiler=Effect Monsters]When this card changes its position, select 1 Monster on your opponents side of the field. The selected card cannot attack, change position, or activate it's effect until your next Standby Phase. If this card is in your graveyard at the start of your Main Phase you may discard two cards to Special Summon it to the field in Face-Up Attack Position or Face-Down Defense Position. If this card is Face-Down on the field it is unaffected by your opponent's monster effects, it also cannot be targeted by a spell or trap that specifically targets one monster. If your opponent attacks this card face down, flip it Face-Up and negate the attack. Select 1 Face-Up Monster on the field. Shan Tsung now has the same ATK and DEF and Monster Effect (if any) of the selected monster until the end of your next Battle Phase. When this card is summoned you may switch target Attack Position monster to Defense Position OR you may flip target Face-Down monster Face-Up without activating it's FLIP effect. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200 for ever monster in your graveyard. As long as this card is Face-Up on the field all EARTH Warriors you control cannot be targeted by your opponent's trap or spell cards. As long as you control another Face-Up DARK Warrior this card cannot be targeted by your opponent's trap or spell cards. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Dragon's Rebirth". At the start of your Main Phase you may Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard in Face-Down Attack Position. It is treated as a Face-Up Level 3 Dark Zombie type monster with an ATK and DEF of 1000. when this card is destroyed destroy all cards this card may have summoned. [spoiler=Magic]You can only activate this card if you have at least 1 face-up Warrior or Beast-Warrior type monster on your side of the field. All warrior and beast-warrior type monsters you control increase their ATK and DEF by 400. If at any point you no longer control any Warrior or Beast-Warrior type monsters this card is destroyed. Select 1 Face-Up monster you control. This monster cannot be destroyed till your next Main Phase. All monsters that attack or are attacked by your selected monster are destroyed without applying damage calculation. Select 1 face-up Monster card you control, destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field with a lower ATK then your selected monster. Select 1 card at random from your opponent's hand if it is a monster card destroy it if it is a trap or spell card add it to your hand. You may search your deck for a Field Magic Card and play it. Your deck is then shuffled. Increase the ATK and DEF of all DARK Warrior type monsters by 300. Play this card if there is a Field Magic Card in play. You may search your deck for a Field Magic Card and play it. The 2 Field cards are now considered 1 Field card with both card's s effects active. Your deck is then shuffled. Target non-Beast Type monster you control increases its ATK and DEF by 300 and is considered a beast type monster until the end of the turn. Whenever a monster you control destroys 1 of your opponent's monsters in Attack Position double the amount of damage caused to your opponent's life points. This card is only active the turn it is played. All monsters on the Field are now considered DARK monsters. Select 2 Level 4 or lower face-up monsters you control, as long as this card remains up on the field those two monsters Attack and Defend as 1 monster with a combined ATK and DEF, they are still considered 2 monsters. If one of the monsters is removed from the field this card is destroyed. This card is used to Ritual Summon "Onaga: The Dragon King". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. [spoiler=Traps]Activate this card when one of your opponent's monsters is sent from the field to the graveyard as the result of a battle. Add the destroyed monster to your graveyard rather then your opponent's. Activate when a monster you control is sent from the field to the graveyard. Add the destroyed monster to your hand. Activate when a monster you control is sent from the field to the graveyard as a result of a battle. At the end of the turn you may special summon the destroyed monster in Face-Up Attack Position. In edition the monster gets 800 ATK and DEF as long as the monster that destroyed it is Face-Up on the Field. Activate when 1 of your opponent's monsters attacks. Destroy the attacking monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted September 5, 2010 Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 I didn't go through all of them, just took a peak here and there, but I have to say that I'm pretty impressed ;) For your first cards, those are actually pretty decent (a really rare thing nowadays, and especially here in Pop Culture). The pictures are solid - great, the effects are pretty creative and follow the rules of grammar (another rare thing). Of course, the OCG (Offical Card Grammar) has still some flaws, but that's something you'll get the hang off sooner or later, don't worry about that :) Just a minor thing you should keep in mind for future sets: Don't post them all at once. First of all, it helps attracting viewers, because there's always something new to explore. And second, you can work on the things that the others cirticize and prevent mistakes rather than correcting them. Oh, and for your poll: Do whatever you want, don't let the crowd fool you :lol: So long and welcome to the forum, Spoon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkness Princess Posted September 5, 2010 Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 I noticed a few OCG errors but overall it seems like a very nice Deck. I would use it at Regionals xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2tudew Posted November 13, 2012 Report Share Posted November 13, 2012 well done, some of those level 5 monsters seem kinda weak tho at 1800 atk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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