chaosreaper Posted September 6, 2010 Report Share Posted September 6, 2010 heres my first card, would like to know what people think before i continue the set. and i know there are wording and terminology errors, i will try my best to correct them. and i realize some ppl (if not all ppl) think they are underpowered, but once i get to work on the ????gazillion different support cards, youll see what im trying to do. If you want an idea of what i am trying to do, go on google and search [i]digital devil saga full mantra grid[/i] and [i]digital devil saga 2 full mantra grid[/i] and youll see what im trying to do. wish me luck. these ar gonna take a while. [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/5930/256627.jpg[/img] lore - This card cannot be destroyed in battle against WATER monsters, and any battle Damage this cards controller would take in a battle with a WATER monster is Halved. If this card battles a Non-WATER monster, it is not destroyed by Battle Once per turn. If This card Battles a FIRE monster, any battle damage this cards controller recieves is doubled. [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/5930/256627.jpg[/img] This card cannot be destroyed in battle against FIRE monsters, and any battle Damage this cards controller would take in a battle with a FIRE monster is Halved. If this card battles a Non-FIRE monster, it is not destroyed by Battle Once per turn. If This card Battles a WATER monster, any battle damage this cards controller recieves is doubled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X-treme! Posted September 6, 2010 Report Share Posted September 6, 2010 I like it for a new card for a new member, very good, but people here don't like pictures without backgrounds. 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosreaper Posted September 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2010 Thanks. i did find some pics with a background, but the varna in them was either only partly there or didnt contrast with the background well or i didnt like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X-treme! Posted September 6, 2010 Report Share Posted September 6, 2010 Well use them and the other members will be the judge of that. Also could you comment on my battle for earth set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosreaper Posted September 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2010 *bump* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosreaper Posted September 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2010 i want to know what others think about this. please comment and i will decide if i will make some more or not. thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosreaper Posted September 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 *bump* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosreaper Posted September 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 no one wants to make any comments? hmm. maybe ill post a couple more and see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the name is so long that i Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 [quote name='chaosreaper' timestamp='1283779077' post='4605815'] heres my first card, would like to know what people think before i continue the set. and i know there are wording and terminology errors, i will try my best to correct them. [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/5930/256627.jpg[/img] lore - This card cannot be destroyed in battle against WATER monsters, and any battle Damage this cards controller would take in a battle with a WATER monster is Halved. If this card battles a Non-WATER monster, it is nost destroyed by Battle Once per turn. If This card Battles a FIRE monster, any battle damage this cards controller recieves is doubled. [/quote] good idea but i'ed not want that card sorry. by the by how do you do the drop-down thing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jenofresh Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 If you need help getting a BG for your card, the Shop might have someone that can render the image into it for you at a price. I'd try looking around in there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyranitar Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 what does "nost" mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosreaper Posted September 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 oops, typo...ill edit, and what do you mean by 'drop down thing' ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosreaper Posted September 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 new card added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosreaper Posted September 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Sorrow. Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Alright since you want much attention to this card I'll give it a look sees.. A very nice try on the Official Card Grammar (OCG for short) but there are some OCG errors I see, its Under powered and it only focuses on the elements I see your trying to be realistic here but they are not very good card effects. The ATK and DEF is over powered( OPed for short) a simple Lvl. 4 monster is something like 1500/1200.. Not that it matters but the pic should need a background, white backgrounds get some Noobs Pissy. Overall Score is 4/10, don't get discouraged just take a look and fix your screw ups.. Now for some advice, this is advice I give to every New Card Maker. Look at cards that have good ratings and beautiful presentation, get inspired by someone who you would call a Legendary Card Maker. For Example, Lovely C. C., or Yankee... Also good luck on this site Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosreaper Posted October 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 Thanks. ill try and fix my errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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The Great Milenko Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 [quote name='Sorrow.' timestamp='1286196834' post='4678530'] Alright since you want much attention to this card I'll give it a look sees.. A very nice try on the Official Card Grammar (OCG for short) but there are some OCG errors I see, its Under powered and it only focuses on the elements I see your trying to be realistic here but they are not very good card effects. The ATK and DEF is over powered( OPed for short) [b][color="#FF8C00"]a simple Lvl. 4 monster is something like 1500/1200[/color][/b].. Not that it matters but the pic should need a background, white backgrounds get some Noobs Pissy. Overall Score is 4/10, don't get discouraged just take a look and fix your screw ups.. Now for some advice, this is advice I give to every New Card Maker. Look at cards that have good ratings and beautiful presentation, get inspired by someone who you would call a Legendary Card Maker. For Example, Lovely C. C., or Yankee... Also good luck on this site [/quote] A level 4 with ATK1500 DEF1200? Pretty weak if you ask me. Sounds like a level 3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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