The funny thing is that the closer it gets, the more it looks like a dynamite wielding goblin riding an eagle.

[chedbonlahor]

My newest card. Before you comment, read the effect and read it again. So before I get comments saying:

"OMG you are screwing your opponent with the dynamite token", the dynamite token can defend ones lifepoints, you can still set and special summon and you can also use the dynamite token as a tribute. Here it is:

[img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/2538/217615.jpg[/img]

LORE: This card is also treated as FIRE and this card is also treated as a Pyro-Type monster. This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Whenever this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, you can draw 1 card from your Deck and skip your next Draw Phase. Discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 "Dynamite Token" (Rock-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0 DEF 0) in Defence Position to your opponent's side of the field. Whenever your opponent Normal Summons a monster while in control of a "Dynamite Token", destroy the suummoned monster and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 300, the "Dynamite Token" is then removed from the field.

[kremlin]

okay that monster looks cool. he sounds like he would be a next generation earthbound immortal though.

[chedbonlahor]

[quote name='kremlin' timestamp='1283793248' post='4606650']
okay that monster looks cool. he sounds like he would be a next generation earthbound immortal though.
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Kl I dont really know what a "next gen earthbound immorrtal" is but thanks.

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Not too bad Ched, I like the idea. The pic is good, the effect is original enough and playable and it's creative. My biggest problem is OCG. The part about drawing a card and skipping your draw phrase needs reworded, something like this: "Whenever this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. If you activate this effect, skip your next Draw Phase."

[Smesh]

discard 5 cards, clog their field.

opponent's life points are low, discard 1 card, summon dynamite token, activate Wave Motion Cannon, win.

[chedbonlahor]

[quote name='FTW (For The Wynn)' timestamp='1283793805' post='4606694']
Not too bad Ched, I like the idea. The pic is good, the effect is original enough and playable and it's creative. My biggest problem is OCG. The part about drawing a card and skipping your draw phrase needs reworded, something like this: "Whenever this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. If you activate this effect, skip your next Draw Phase."
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Thanks for the comment, the thing is though that what you are talking about are two separate effects caused by destroying a monster
1. drawing
2. skipping draw phase

What i did in the card was to make 1 effect and combine the drawing and skipping the draw phase into 1 whole effect.

I think OCG wise there is nothing wrong with:

"draw 1 card from your deck and skip your next draw phase" if anyone else thinks there is something wrong with it please tell me.

Thanks again for the comment.

[Smesh]

I also forgot to say, Dark World's like this card.

[chedbonlahor]

[quote name='¡Smesh!' timestamp='1283793861' post='4606701']
discard 5 cards, clog their field.

opponent's life points are low, discard 1 card, summon dynamite token, activate Wave Motion Cannon, win.
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To respond to "discard 5 cards, clog their field" the tokens as I said are in turn defending, your life points so essentially your opponent has lost 5 cards from their hand and cant inflict direct damage under normal circumstances lol

-every cloud has a silver lining
-if life gives you lemons make lemonade

you make do with what you get with yugioh,

thanks for the comment again though smesh.

Guys,

FTW (For The Wynn) raises an intruiging point about OCG, when i put:

"draw 1 card from your Deck and skip your next Draw Phase" he believes it should be, "you can draw 1 card from your Deck. If you activate this effect, skip your next Draw Phase"

Although I am not disagreeing with him I think that the OCG is correct for both,

ideas.....?