Freedom Fighters

[Battery Boy]

Plz Comment and rate i need to know what is wrong with my cards thank you with some of these i thought the descriptions were readable so i am not going to post there effects

TRAPS:

Call to Arms
[img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/426/199216.jpg[/img]

Freedom Shield
[img]http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/426/199216.jpg[/img]

SPELLS:

Demon Anarcy
[img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/426/199216.jpg[/img]

Heroic Justice
[img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/426/199216.jpg[/img]

Premptive Strike
[img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/426/199216.jpg[/img]

War Cry
[img]http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/3602/199216b.jpg[/img]

MONSTERS:

Freedom Fighter- General
[img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/426/199216.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summond or Set.This card cannot be Special Summond except by tributing 3 "Freedom Fighters" from the field. While this card is face up on the field increase the Atk and Def of all "Freedom Fighter" monsters by 600 points.[/spoiler]

Freedom Fighter- Preistest
[img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/1094/199216l.jpg[/img]

Freedom Fighter- War Hero
[img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/426/199216.jpg[/img]

Freedom Fighter- Warmonger
[img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/3818/199216h.jpg[/img]

Freedom Fighter- King
[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/426/199216.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]When this card is Normal, Flip, or Special Summoned, you may Special Summon 1 "Freedom Frighter-Queen" from your extra deck. While this card remains face up on the feild increase the ATK of all "Freedom Fighter" monsters on your side of the field x200 for each card in the Graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle destroy all face up "non-Freedom Fighter" monsters.[/spoiler]

Freedom Fighter- Necromancer
[img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/426/199216.jpg[/img]

Freedom Fighter- Princess
[img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/751/199216x.jpg[/img]

SYNCROS:

Freedom Fighter- Queen
[img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/426/199216.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]"1 tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters"
While this card is on the field increase the DEF of all monsters on your side of the feild by 500. When this card is destroyed you can special summon 1 monster from your graveyard and double its ATK. When that monster is destroyed removed from play your hand.[/spoiler]

FUSIONS:

Freedom Fighter- Warrior Princess
[img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/426/199216.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]Freedom Fighter-War Hero+Freedom Fighter-Princess
You can Special Summon this card by sending the above cards to the graveyard (do not use polymerization.) While this card is on the feild, once per turn, you may Special Summon one card from the graveyard or removed from play.[/spoiler]

RITUALS:
Freedom Fighter- Angel Master
[img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/426/199216.jpg[/img]
[Spoiler=Lore]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Heroic Justice". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 12 or more as a Tribute from your hand or feild. As long as this card remains face up on your side of the feild, your oppondent cannot select another "Freedom Fighter" monster as an attack target on your side of the feild.[/Spoiler]

Freedom Figther- Demon Master
[img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/8038/199216ko.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]This card can only be Ritual Summond by the Rtiual Spell Card "Demon Anarchy." You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 12 or more as a tribute from the feild or your hand. While this card is face up on the field only monsters with "Freedom Fighter" in there names can attack.[/Spoiler]


Thank you for looking at my cards. Can u plz tell me how to improve my cards and if they are OPed or not? Also how to fix them in anyway needed? Thanx.

[Lady_Killer]

The whole setup is unique in its own way; However, Some of your cards are Up'ed and some of them are Op'ed. Also i see a lot of OCG errors (i.e. one should be 1, Feild is spelt field, Ect.), and your set could contain a lot more sacrifice fodder ( level 4 or lower monsters). Other than that is seems OK for a first set. Keep up the good work.

Also, Heroic Justice looks so sexy.