chedbonlahor Posted September 7, 2010 Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 I felt in the mood to create a vanilla, I dont know why, but here it is. this image I feel is quite depressing so I put that into the description, what do you think: [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/3056/217615g.jpg[/img] LORE: This gargantuan mass of armor and metal wanders enlessly through the rubble of his creator's home planet. Powered by such an andvanced level of technology, this mechanical juggernaut is said to project a strange melancholy aura. The groans and straining of his aching steel can be heard for miles as he searches in vain for his creator. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted September 7, 2010 Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 Try to refrain from making Vanillas without support. I like the lore, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noveno Colono Posted September 7, 2010 Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 I like the pic, it goes perfect with the description. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 [quote name='Noveno Colono' timestamp='1283822793' post='4608858'] I like the pic, it goes perfect with the description. [/quote] Thanks very much, that's what I intended. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted September 7, 2010 Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 Awwww.. how sad for the Giant.. I hope he finds his creator some day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 [quote name='Grand_Hokage_Tsunade' timestamp='1283822908' post='4608867'] Awwww.. how sad for the Giant.. I hope he finds his creator some day. [/quote] lol I'm glad you got the malancholy nature of the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted September 7, 2010 Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 By the way.. who [i]is[/i] the giants creator? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
► ®Ćŕý® ◄ Posted September 7, 2010 Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 I feel sad for the giant, I won't rate this card because I don't feel you really wanted one. I enjoy the discription. And yes, who is it's 'creator'. :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandelo Posted September 7, 2010 Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 May want to change the spelling to "juggernaut". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted September 7, 2010 Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 Clair is right. its great ur trying to be different with the whole vanilla thing. but u have to at least make a story of support. maybe try your hand at geminis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 7, 2010 Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 Weak for a Level 9. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 [quote name='Professor Cobra' timestamp='1283827142' post='4609124'] Weak for a Level 9. 8/10 [/quote] What about its defence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SP0RE Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 I don't believe "andvanced" is a word, I think you may be looking for Advanced Any way I love the card... Just needs some more "Family" if you get what I mean... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 [quote name='Thunderpants' timestamp='1284205764' post='4616374'] I don't believe "andvanced" is a word, I think you may be looking for Advanced Any way I love the card... Just needs some more "Family" if you get what I mean... [/quote] Haha ye thanks for spotting the typo lol, I may create some more cards soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrathos Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 I wouldn't have a problem with Konami releasing a level 9 or higher normal monster. But until they do, you should probably refrain from making them and putting them in "Realistic". Other than that I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 [quote name='Wrathos' timestamp='1284206200' post='4616391'] I wouldn't have a problem with Konami releasing a level 9 or higher normal monster. But until they do, you should probably refrain from making them and putting them in "Realistic". Other than that I like it. [/quote] They used to make vanillas like this BEWD par example lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheMan Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 Poor thing , so strong and so desperate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 [quote name='TheMan' timestamp='1284206741' post='4616414'] Poor thing , so strong and so desperate [/quote] I'm glad you get the sentiment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrathos Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 [quote name='chedbonlahor' timestamp='1284206733' post='4616413'] They used to make vanillas like this BEWD par example lol [/quote] He's level 8. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 [quote name='Wrathos' timestamp='1284206889' post='4616419'] He's level 8. [/quote] True true but the level of power is similar methinks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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