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Anubis05

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Hi everyone!!.I have made a new card yay!!.
Here it is:

[img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/702/177878.jpg[/img]


[b]Lore[/b]:
While the combined Levels of all monsters your opponent controls is 8 or more, your opponent cannot declare an attack. Destroy this card if you control no face-up monsters.

I know its a very simple effect but i liked it.Im not sure if the image fits the card, i feel its mising something else.
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Hope u like it, enjoy:)
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Probably should be a Trap Card, but not half bad. OCG in't too bad either.

OCG Fix:
While the combined Levels of all monsters your opponent controls is 8 or more, your opponent cannot declare an attack. Destroy this card if you control no face-up monsters.
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I like this concept, but something doesn't feel quite right.

I think (this is just me) that the two halves off the effect don't really relate to each other or are balanced. I mean, you're most likely to need this card when you are struggling for monsters. And on the flip side, if you're opponent can't attack, how likely are you to lose monsters? Which makes it a tad unbalanced, not in an overpowered way, just in an odd way.

Maybe the spell should fail if it's own conditions aren't met, i.e. your opponent having a combination of 7 stars or lower worth of monsters on the field.

Other than that nice job really fitting picture and a quite playable card.

Ps. don't worry about lack of comments. That usually means there's nothing to critise rather than it's a bad card. ;)

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