Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 10, 2010 Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 Did some redos on my Asura set. I'm more worried about balance rather than OCG right now, but fixes are still welcome. New cards added [spoiler=monsters] [img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/6626/276075.jpg[/img] Lore: Any battle damage this card inflicts becomes 0. This card cannot attack directly. If this card destroys a monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as effect damage to your opponent. [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/4369/276075n.jpg[/img] Lore: Any battle damage this card inflicts becomes 0. This card cannot attack directly. This monster cannot be tributed. If your opponent controls a Defense Position monster while you control no monsters, you can special summon this monster from your hand and inflict damage equal to the number of cards controlled by your opponent x100. If this card is special summoned in this way, it cannot attack until your next turn. [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/4061/276075a.jpg[/img] Lore: Any battle damage this card inflicts becomes 0. This card cannot attack directly. Once per turn, if this monster destroys a Defense Position monster, inflict 500 damage to your opponent and this monster can attack once again. [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/1410/276075l.jpg[/img] Lore: Any battle damage this card inflicts becomes 0. This card cannot attack directly. If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation and inflict 500 damage to your opponent. [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/417/276075z.jpg[/img] Lore: Any battle damage this card inflicts becomes 0. This card cannot attack directly. Once per turn, you may special summon 1 level 4 or lower "Asura" monster, except "Asura Priest", from your hand and decrease your opponent's life points by the level of the summoned monster x100. The special summoned monster cannot attack or be tributed until your next turn. [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/6913/276075g.jpg[/img] Lore: Any battle damage this card inflicts becomes 0. This monster cannot attack directly. Once per turn, you can select 1 "Asura" monster you control. Destroy 1 monster your opponent controls with an equal or lower level than the selected monster and inflict damage equal to the level of the destroyed monster x200. This card cannot attack the turn you use this effect. [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/2397/276075h.jpg[/img] Lore: Any battle damage this card inflicts becomes 0. This card cannot attack directly. Once per turn, if your opponent controls a face-up Defense Position monster, you can inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/6626/276075.jpg[/img] Lore: Any battle damage this card inflicts becomes 0. This card cannot attack directly You can special summon this monster by tributing 1 "Asura" monster you control and changing the Battle Position of 1 monster your opponent controls. If this monster was Special Summoned by this effect, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent and this monster's ATK becomes 2000. [/spoiler] [spoiler=spells] [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/4093/276075x.jpg[/img] Lore: Whenever an "Asura" monster destroys an opponents monster by battle, except "Asura Priest", you can discard a card to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monsters level x300. [/spoiler] [spoiler=traps] [img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/2397/276075h.jpg[/img] Activate only when your opponent attacks a face-up Attack Position "Asura" mosnter. Destroy the attacking monster and inflict damage equal to half the destroyed mosnter's Attack to your opponent. [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/8053/276075e.jpg[/img] Activate only when an "Asura" monster, except "Asura Priest", is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. Special any number of LVL 6 or lower "Asura" monsters, except "Asura Priest", from your Hand or Graveyard. Their effects are negated. Any battle damage they inflict becomes 0 and they cannot attack directly. If this card is removed from the field, send the monsters that were Special Summoned by this card's effect to the graveyard. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScrapperTBP Posted September 10, 2010 Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 I know for Asura Champion you said it can inflict piercing as effect damage but I am not sure that goes with your theme of no battke damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 [quote name='ScrapperTBP' timestamp='1284146036' post='4614045'] I know for Asura Champion you said it can inflict piercing as effect damage but I am not sure that goes with your theme of no battke damage. [/quote] Its a burn deck, when I did this originally I had the monsters unable to attack directly, and the champion was able to pierce. Since reworking it made no battle damage, and I couldn't think up another effect, I did this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted September 10, 2010 Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 They all look pretty balanced, and it looks like you got creative with it. 9.1/10, would like to see more. In the effects, you should probably make it clear that direct attacks don't do damage either, elsewise people will just clear the field and abuse the hell out of 2000+ monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 [quote name='Lord Smeagle' timestamp='1284146996' post='4614107'] They all look pretty balanced, and it looks like you got creative with it. 9.1/10, would like to see more. In the effects, you should probably make it clear that direct attacks don't do damage either, elsewise people will just clear the field and abuse the hell out of 2000+ monsters. [/quote] Isn't a direct attack considered as battle damage? If not can someone give me a good OCG fix that doesn't get too long winded? Also, I already have more, but last time I posted a set it just made me look dumb since they were all way too abusable and OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 2 monsters and a spell thrown in. Not sure on Necrolyte, need feedback on her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted September 10, 2010 Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 Took a few read throughs to understand these, but that's maybe me being thick. Like someone said probably need to say Direct Battle Damage = 0. Anyway these look quite good. Think Eastern Welcome is a Continuous rather than a Field really. As for Necrolyte should probably be hand OR graveyard rather than either. If you go with Graveyard weaken it's stats otherwise it could become abusable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted September 10, 2010 Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 Necrolyte might be abusable, depending on if you make really big Asuras or not. Also, the part about not summoning Asura Priest is irrelevant because Spirits can't be Special Summoned anyway...you can change it if you want but it's not a big deal. Fighter is fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 [quote name='Matt Bahamut' timestamp='1284152443' post='4614511'] Took a few read throughs to understand these, but that's maybe me being thick. Like someone said probably need to say Direct Battle Damage = 0. [b]I'll add that in then.[/b] Anyway these look quite good. Think Eastern Welcome is a Continuous rather than a Field really. As for Necrolyte should probably be hand OR graveyard rather than either. If you go with Graveyard weaken it's stats otherwise it could become abusable. [b]I was worried about her. But what I'm really worried about is if the no level restriction is gonna hurt, since I have a level 7 one that has major attack that could be abused beyond reason. Changing now.[/b] [/quote][quote name='Lord Smeagle' timestamp='1284152604' post='4614526'] Necrolyte might be abusable, depending on if you make really big Asuras or not. Also, the part about not summoning Asura Priest is irrelevant because Spirits can't be Special Summoned anyway...you can change it if you want but it's not a big deal. Fighter is fine. [/quote] Never noticed that. I'll keep it this way though, you never know what freaky things could happen in a duel Effects changed. Still have more coming if it seems acceptable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 Since there weren't any other comments, I added a couple new cards. I'm hoping to use the other character in the Cross Smasher art in another set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rofalat Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 Very Nice. keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 Still waiting for feedback on the recent additions. Ran out of pics for the rest, so this it it for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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