Please Work

[drago555]

[·Toot]

kinda awkward

 

i don't think i should point out mistakes

 

they are very clear

[Legokun]

*sighs*

 

This is just, no. Let me help you.

Never have 9999 ATK or DEF.

Never make 12 Stars, unless you have a massive summoning condition.

Next, your OCG is horrid, and never, Never, NEVER, make cards like this.

 

You should make it like this.

 

Drago - (Title)

Dragon

**********

ATK 3000

DEF 3500

This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card can only be Normal Summoned by tributing 3 Trap Monsters you control. If this card were to be destroyed, you can double the battle damage instead. You can tribute 3 monsters you control to destroy all monsters your opponent controls. If your opponent Summons a monster with fewer than 1300 DEF, you can pay 1000 Life Points to take control of it.

 

-4/10

[Rampage567]

Name - Bland

OCG - My eyes hurt just looking at it

Pic - Meh.

Realisim - A blind man would know the diffrence between this card and a real card.

+_________________________________________________________________

Horrible card.

[~{Rochster}~]

*sighs*

 

This is just, no. Let me help you.

Never have 9999 ATK or DEF.

Never make 12 Stars, unless you have a massive summoning condition.

Next, your OCG is horrid, and never, Never, NEVER, make cards like this.

 

You should make it like this.

 

Drago - (Title)

Dragon

**********

ATK 3000

DEF 3500

This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card can only be Normal Summoned by tributing 3 Trap Monsters you control. If this card were to be destroyed, you can double the battle damage instead. You can tribute 3 monsters you control to destroy all monsters your opponent controls. If your opponent Summons a monster with fewer than 1300 DEF, you can pay 1000 Life Points to take control of it.

 

-4/10

wtf is a trap monster?

[Legokun]

[Dante Dimercurio]

FAIL. 0/10.

[Guest JoshIcy]

FAIL. 0/10.

 

Same goes for you.