Makο Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 Title^ [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/7927/258841x.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Attacked by Warrior-Types during the 1st Phase it has been summoned. This card can only Attack Warrior-Types after the 1st Phase it has been summoned during. Once you have summoned it, place 3 Far-Sight counters(max.3) on it. Every Battle Phase, remove 1 and place it on a card of you choice. That cards effect has been negated for 3 Turns. Plz comment and rate^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 Post the lore please. It helps members on iPods out ;_; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 It is pretty realistic... OCG needs work though Instead of 3 turns maybe 2? 7.75/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted September 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 Thx for the Comment, Serenity. As for Smesh, I posted the Lore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 I think instead of 1st phase it should 1st turn because the only time a card can attack is during the Battle Phase.(unless an effect says so, But I havent seen 1 yet) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 OCG is pretty bad. I would help, but iPods have terrible copy and paste. I either didn't pay attention well, or the OCG was just unbearable. Probably a lil of both though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rofalat Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 I love the idea and what you were trying to do. Can you please revised it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 11, 2010 Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 [quote name='Mako109' timestamp='1284183638' post='4615984'] Title^ [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/7927/258841x.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Attacked by Warrior-Types during the first turn it was summoned. This card can only Attack Warrior-Types after the first turn it was summoned. When you summon this card, place 3 Far-Sight counters(max.3) on it. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, move 1 Far-Sight counter onto a card of you choice. When a monster other than"Far-Seeing Crusader" has a Far-Sight counter on it, its effect is negated for three turns. Plz comment and rate^^ [/quote] I did what I could with OCG, but I'm not the best either. Nice thoughts, hope to see more. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted September 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2010 Thx everyone for your criticism. The more I receive, the better card maker I'll be^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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