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[δαίμονας] Hey, Look! Another Goblin Attack Force!


John A. Zoidberg

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Before viewing the card, I ask you to read this introduction. Here was my idea for this card:
What if there was a fusion monster, that technically wasn't a fusion, and needed a spell card as part of the fusion materials? 1 monster and 1 spell?

And then, this card was born.
Enjoy :D
OCG fixes, comments, and criticism are welcome.

[img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/5443/227682j.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 "Goblin Attack Force" equipped with "Axe of Despair" to the Graveyard. At the End Phase a turn this card attacked, change it to face-up Defense Position. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap card, add 1 "Goblin Attack Force" or 1 "Axe of Despair" from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler]

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[quote name='Prince Mush' timestamp='1284223628' post='4617166']
Haha. a "Fusion" with a monster and spell. Original. I was blown away by the pic. It is definitely the pic that I would say matches the original. Very well done. Although I wouldn't trade in a Goblin Attack Force with 3300 ATK for one with 2800. I know there's some explanation. :) 9/10
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Good point, very good point indeed.
Maybe I should implement some kind of burn effect at the end? Such as,
"If this card attacks and your opponent takes 1000 or less damage, they lose 1000 Life Points."
I know my OCG isn't much right there, but I just sorta threw that together.

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Its a very nice/unique card, I can't say I have seen a fusion between a monster an spell before so bravo for the thought. First the OCG is very good but I think it just needs polishing off, allow me:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 1 "Goblin Attack Force" equipped with "Axe of Despair" to the Graveyard. This card is changed to Defence Position at the End Phase of a turn this card declares an attack. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap card, add 1 "Goblin Attack Force" or 1 "Axe of Despair" from your Deck to your hand."

That should do it :)

The only 1 criticism I have of the card is the image, I appreciate there are little or perhaps no images that reflect a fusion between GAF and AoD but there is something slightly blocky and wrong with the image. However, this is only a minor grievance and the card in general is great.

9.2/10

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[quote name='Ser Warjacksworth' timestamp='1284232061' post='4617679']
A better summoning condition like "You can Tribute 1 face-up Defense Position Warrior-Type monster you control to Special Summon this card in Attack Position" would be nice.

As it is 4/10 UP
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No. I wouldn't do that BECAUSE I wanted to make it specific. I know right now it's UP, but you obviously didn't read that I was adding an extra effect or 2 when I felt like it.
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