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2 new card for my favourite archetype:


[img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/4619/131538.jpg[/img]

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is in face-up Defense Position, destroy it. When you Normal Summon this card, place 1 Fog Counter on it for each "Cloudian" monster on the field. You can remove 1 Fog Counters from this card to double the ATK of a face up "Cloudian" monster.

[img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/1865/131538r.jpg[/img]

"Cloudian Elk" + 1 or more non-Tuner "Cloudian" monsters
This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is in face-up Defense Position, destroy it. While this card is face up on the feild halve all Battle Damage you take, and double all Battle Damage your opponent takes.


what do you think?

[Prince Mush]

Cloudian Elk:

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is in face-up Defense Position, destroy it. When [b]this card is Normal Summoned[/b], place 1 Fog Counter on it for each [b]face-up[/b] "Cloudian" monster on the field. You can remove 1 Fog Counter[s]s[/s] from this card to double the ATK of [b]1[/b] face up "Cloudian" monster [b]on the field/you control[/b] (whichever one you mean).

Cloudian Lepard:

"Cloudian Elk" + 1 or more non-Tuner "Cloudian" monsters
This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is in face-up Defense Position, destroy it. While this card is face up on the f[b]ie[/b]ld halve all Battle Damage you take, and double all Battle Damage your opponent takes.

Corrections that I know of are in bold. That last part I'm unsure about. To tell you the truth, these cards aren't half bad. They could use [b]much[/b] better pics though. Besides that, the effects are somewhat bland, but fair. 7/10

[hexcalibrate]

for cloudian elk i copy and pasted the main cloudian ability

[Prince Mush]

Then they spelled field wrong.

[hexcalibrate]

no that was me.