'Dead" Set.

[tim0tee]

[img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/6827/271620.jpg[/img]


Lore:All monsters on the field and in the Graveyard are treated as Zombie-Type monsters. All face-up Zombie-Type monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF. Once per turn during your Standby Phase, you can Ritual Summon a Zombie-Type DARK Ritual monster, You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars are double the amount of Level Stars the selected monster has from either side of the field or your hand.

[img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/3831/271620t.jpg[/img]


Lore:This card can only be Ritual Summoned Using "Death Harbinging". Once, during your Main Phase you can equip an opponents monster to this card. This card gains the ATK and DEF of the equipped monster(s). In order to use this effect, you have to pay the equipped monster(s) level in Life Points x 200 during each of your Standby Phases. If this card would be destroyed by battle, destroy a monster equipped to this card instead.


[img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/2929/271620q.jpg[/img]


[img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/3243/271620n.jpg[/img]

Lore:This card can only be Ritual Summoned using the effect of "Death Harbinging". This card cannot attack. Once per turn, you can send one face-up Level 4 or lower monster from the field to the graveyard (regardless of who controls it) then, on your 2nd Standby Phase after this effect was used, you can Special Summon that card to your side of the field.



[img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/2676/271620w.jpg[/img]


Lore: The card can only be Ritual Summoned by using "Death Harbinging". If there is no face-up Zombie-Type monsters on the field, destroy this card. When this card is on the field, flip all cards face-up. This card gains 300 ATK for each Zombie-Type monster on the field, excluding this card.

[img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/6827/271620.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Death Harbinging". You must also offer "Kaah, Leader of the Dead Legions" "Kraawl, Beast of the Dead" "Ristar, Harbinger of the Dead" and "Ueso, Leader of the Dead Knights" as a tribute. When this card is summoned this way, You win the duel.

[tim0tee]

I bet no-one is replying just because I said I am a Newbie...

[Shadowfang1992]

[quote name='tim0tee' timestamp='1284502077' post='4627408']
I bet no-one is replying just because I said I am a Newbie...
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Lol, don't worry, I feel the same way sometimes, and I haven't actually been on this site for very long ^^ I think the cards are good, but some of the pics are fuzzy and "The Lord of the Dead" isn't as much a Ritual card as the others are. I would make it a fusion instead, and have the monsters used to summon it be Fusion Material Monsters. Also, instead of "0" as it's ATK/DEF, try making it a "?". Or, if you can, try to make it an infinity sign, though I have no idea how to do that, lol. That would make it seem more powerful, I think ^^ Oh, and here are some corrections for your OCG:

Ristar: This card can only be Ritual Summoned [s]by using[/s] [b]with the Ritual Spell Card[/b] "Death Harbinging". Once, during [b]each of[/b] your Main Phase[b]s[/b] you can equip [s]an[/s] [b]one of your[/b] opponent[b]'[/b]s monster[b](s)[/b] to this card. This card gains the ATK/DEF of the equipped monster(s). In order to use this effect, you have to pay the equipped monster(s) level in Life Points x 200 during each of your Standby Phases. If this card would be destroyed by battle, destroy a monster equipped to this card instead.

Kraawl: This card can only be Ritual Summoned [s]by using[/s] [b]with the Ritual Spell Card[/b] "Death Harbinging". For every Zombie-Type [s]card this destroys and sends to the graveyard[/s] [b]monster this card destroys,[/b] this card gains 300 ATK.

Kaah: This card can only be Ritual Summoned [s]using the effect of[/s] [b]with the Ritual Spell Card[/b] "Death Harbinging". This card cannot attack. Once per turn, you can send one face-up Level 4 or lower monster from the field to the [b]G[/b]raveyard[b].[/b] [s](regardless of who controls it)[/s] [s]then, on[/s] During your 2nd Standby Phase after this effect was activated, you can Special Summon that card to your side of the field.

Ueso: This card can only be Ritual Summoned [s]by using[/s] [b]with the Ritual Spell Card[/b] "Death Harbinging". If there [s]is[/s] [b]are[/b] no face-up Zombie-Type monsters on the field, destroy this card. When this card is on the field, flip all cards face-up. This card gains 300 ATK for each Zombie-Type monster on the field[s], excluding[/s] [b]except[/b] this card.

The Lord of the Dead: I won't correct this one, because I still think it would do better as a Fusion Monster.

The only reason I know half of these mistakes is because I've had to fix my own cards after other people pointed it out.

[~{Rochster}~]

i say the last one is kinda op'd, but its very hard to summon. maybe it should be like this: this card can only be summoned by using "Death Harbringing." you must also offer "Kaah, Leader of the Dead Legions" "Kraawl, Beast of the Dead" "Ristar, Harbinger of the Dead" and "Ueso, Leader of the Dead Knights" as a tribute. when this card is summoned this way, you win the duel.

[tim0tee]

Thanks for the OCG fixes and whatnot. The problem with Lord of the Dead Fusion is that I wouldn't know how to make his effect for fusion summon without making it tremendously long.

[Shadowfang1992]

[quote name='rochster' timestamp='1284505735' post='4627641']
i say the last one is kinda op'd, but its very hard to summon. maybe it should be like this: this card can only be summoned by using "Death Harbringing." you must also offer "Kaah, Leader of the Dead Legions" "Kraawl, Beast of the Dead" "Ristar, Harbinger of the Dead" and "Ueso, Leader of the Dead Knights" as a tribute. when this card is summoned this way, you win the duel.
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[quote name='tim0tee' timestamp='1284509411' post='4627936']
Thanks for the OCG fixes and whatnot. The problem with Lord of the Dead Fusion is that I wouldn't know how to make his effect for fusion summon without making it tremendously long.
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Rochster: You've got a point. Yea, just do what Rochster says, and it'll work. I didn't think of that.

tim0tee: I see your point. Just do what Rochster said and you'll be fine.

[The God of Darkness]

i agree what everyone else is saying............any way as for the cards ratings


1st 8/10

2nd 6/10

3rd 3/10 its because of its kinda bland

4th 7.2/10

5th 5/10

6th 6.7/10

[tim0tee]

[quote name='The God of Darkness' timestamp='1284526361' post='4628697']
i agree what everyone else is saying............any way as for the cards ratings


1st 8/10

2nd 6/10

3rd 3/10 its because of its kinda bland

4th 7.2/10

5th 5/10

6th 6.7/10
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Thanks for the Ratings, Honestly I agree with your ratings, I thought Kaah was the best and I thought kraawl was the worst, I couldn't think of his effect.

[The God of Darkness]

[quote name='tim0tee' timestamp='1284530122' post='4628738']
Thanks for the Ratings, Honestly I agree with your ratings, I thought Kaah was the best and I thought kraawl was the worst, I couldn't think of his effect.
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ya I hate when that happens