Zextra Posted September 14, 2010 Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 Hello. Here is my new card. Please rate and comment and give suggestions. I would love to make this card better. Thanks! [IMG]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/3777/giratinaswankeditedcorr.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/6748/giratinajapaneseswank.png[/IMG] Lore: 1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters While you control 2 or more DARK monsters, this card cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Altered Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 6/ATK 200/DEF 1500) or 1 "Origin Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 6/ATK 1500/DEF 200). These tokens cannot be used for a Tribute Summon or a Synchro Summon. This card cannot be selected as an attack target while you control an "Altered Token". When an "Origin Token" you control is destroyed by battle, you can place 1 Shadow Force Counter on this card (max. 3). This card gains 400 ATK for each Shadow Force Counter on it. You can Tribute this card with 3 Shadow Force Counters on it to destroy all non-DARK monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the combined Levels of the destroyed monsters x200. During each of your End Phases, discard a DARK monster or remove from play 2 DARK monsters in your Deck. If you cannot, destroy this card and remove from play all DARK monsters in your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted September 14, 2010 Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 Awesome card, Zextra. ^^ I love the background you used in the second one. [b](max. 3)[/b] 9/10 from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 Thanks for the support, Tsunade! I appreciate it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoshi Member Posted September 14, 2010 Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 10/10 Giratina pwns Background is cool.Templates are like heaven.+Gold rares. +rep. Remember.......10/10= +Rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 Thanks, Yoshi I appreciate your support! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 Any more comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted September 15, 2010 Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 [color="#0000FF"][b][center]Wow. Template = sick Effect = O.o OMG wow. Pic = Perfect representation of Giratina Overall = +rep/10 If I have a complaint about that card, it's that the name is card to read because it kind of blends in with the rest of the design. But it's so cool![/center][/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 Thanks a lot! I appreciate your support (and thanks for the rep ) Yeah, sorry about the name. I haven't learned out to change text colors yet. (Aside from the YCM choices: Ultra Rare, Super Rare, etc.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted September 15, 2010 Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 [color="#0000FF"][center][b]It's okay, it's still a great card! Did you make the template?[/b][/center][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 No, I didn't. I'm using it courtesy of Dranzer123. All I did was do the manual work: recolor of the card, placing of the "stars", the gold rare, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted September 15, 2010 Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 You get 9.9999999999.../10. Sorry, but it's just not quite there for my next 10/10. "Ah, my friend. You've returned. You've done more than I cold have hoped." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted September 15, 2010 Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 You get 9.9999999999.../10. Sorry, but it's just not quite there for my next 10/10. "Ah, my friend. You've returned. You've done more than I cold have hoped." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 Thanks a lot anyways. A rating that high is still very supportive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted September 15, 2010 Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 WOWOWOWOW!!! This is even better than the Lugia one! Before I forget, you get a +rep! Then, you missed the space in [i](max. 3) [/i]just as Lauren said and there is one more little thing[i] - equal to the combined [s]total[/s] Level [/i]But that's all and it's quite minor compared to the greatness of the template and the effect creativity! Keep them coming, I want to see another of these soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 Thank you! I appreciate the praise, but it's nothing compared to yours. However, I do appreciate your support, and thanks to you and Lauren for the OCG corrections Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted September 15, 2010 Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 Hm... I still gotta say. No matter how many times I look at a card like this, it never ceases to amaze me. I'm changing my rating to 10/10, and you get a +rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 Thank you! I appreciate your support and the rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakpatrol Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 That is amazing 10/10 and +1 rep Best card ive seen all day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 Thanks a lot! I appreciate the positive feedback and thanks for the rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 [b]That card is amazing. The template is awesome, the effect and image are both awesome. This card is truly amazing. I give you a 10/10 and a Rep for this great card.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted September 17, 2010 Report Share Posted September 17, 2010 the only thing i notice is its GiratIna, you forgot the last I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2010 Oh, wow... Thank you very much for pointing that out. I will edit it right away.Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted September 17, 2010 Report Share Posted September 17, 2010 constructive time 1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters [b]ok, cool[/b] While you control 2 or more DARK monsters, this card cannot be destroyed by card effects. [b]extremely situational[/b] Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Altered Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 6/ATK 200/DEF 1500) or 1 "Origin Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 6/ATK 1500/DEF 200). These tokens cannot be used for a Tribute Summon or a Synchro Summon. This card cannot be selected as an attack target while you control an "Altered Token". [b]The tokens are weak and removing 2 DARKs is very costly.[/b] When an "Origin Token" you control is destroyed by battle, you can place 1 Shadow Force Counter on this card (max. 3). [b]pattern i was telling you about.[/b] This card gains 400 ATK for each Shadow Force Counter on it. [b]Probably wouldnt gain much cuz its hard to get the counters on it, it was already hard to summon the tokens[/b] You can Tribute this card with 3 Shadow Force Counters on it to destroy all non-DARK monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to both players' Life Points equal to the combined Levels of the destroyed monsters x200. [b]This is actually a pretty good nuke. although VERY hard to do. It would proabably be destroyed before it could do this. Maybe damage just to your opponent?[/b] During each of your End Phases, discard a DARK monster or remove from play 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard. If you cannot, destroy this card and remove from play all DARK monsters in your Graveyard. [b]This makes it UP'd. It was looking good, but this makes it unplayable.[/b] Just trying to be more constructive. Work those things out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2010 [quote name='¡Smesh!' timestamp='1284690620' post='4633458'] constructive time 1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters [b]ok, cool[/b] While you control 2 or more DARK monsters, this card cannot be destroyed by card effects. [b]extremely situational[/b] Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Altered Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 6/ATK 200/DEF 1500) or 1 "Origin Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 6/ATK 1500/DEF 200). These tokens cannot be used for a Tribute Summon or a Synchro Summon. This card cannot be selected as an attack target while you control an "Altered Token". [b]The tokens are weak and removing 2 DARKs is very costly.[/b] When an "Origin Token" you control is destroyed by battle, you can place 1 Shadow Force Counter on this card (max. 3). [b]pattern i was telling you about.[/b] This card gains 400 ATK for each Shadow Force Counter on it. [b]Probably wouldnt gain much cuz its hard to get the counters on it, it was already hard to summon the tokens[/b] You can Tribute this card with 3 Shadow Force Counters on it to destroy all non-DARK monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to both players' Life Points equal to the combined Levels of the destroyed monsters x200. [b]This is actually a pretty good nuke. although VERY hard to do. It would proabably be destroyed before it could do this. Maybe damage just to your opponent?[/b] During each of your End Phases, discard a DARK monster or remove from play 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard. If you cannot, destroy this card and remove from play all DARK monsters in your Graveyard. [b]This makes it UP'd. It was looking good, but this makes it unplayable.[/b] Just trying to be more constructive. Work those things out. [/quote] Thank you for the comments: 1. It is a DARK monster itself (so you really only need 1 more) 2. Fair enough 3. OK, I can't help myself sometimes (I love tokens - Plus, Shadow Force is its signature move in the games ) 4. It is hard - I should probably tone down the cost a bit 5. Really? In that case, what drawback should I give it? (I was afraid people are going to say "OP'ed as hell" without it) I appreciate your criticism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted September 17, 2010 Report Share Posted September 17, 2010 Take away the damage to urself. If anyone says it's op'd I'll eat them :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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