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Vongola Headquarters [A KHR Organization] "Ready for a Mafia Summer!"

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HibarixChrome?

Wtf

Did he steal her from Mukuro?


ALSO
BEHOLD TEH GLORY

BROUGHT TO YOU BY ME, SONIC, FUSE, AND A20TH CB (tho mostly me, for this episode >>)

[url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=26YlOHlSfNc&feature=youtube_gdata"][media='']http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=26YlOHlSfNc&feature=youtube_gdata[/media][/url]

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☖☠☗JAXCOB☗☠☖ Newbie

☖☠☗JAXCOB☗☠☖

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HibarixChrome?

Wtf

Did he steal her from Mukuro?


ALSO
BEHOLD TEH GLORY

BROUGHT TO YOU BY ME, SONIC, FUSE, AND A20TH CB (tho mostly me, for this episode >>)

[url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=26YlOHlSfNc&feature=youtube_gdata"][media='']http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=26YlOHlSfNc&feature=youtube_gdata[/media][/url]
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Duh & also <3

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Desu the Blue Nerd

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This is no status DL. I can go all out with this review.

Please note: I have already watched all of it and understand that you did pretty much everything and that trhey'll be doing their roles in the following episodes.

-Copyright: Put the copyright in the beginning not the end. Mention the actual person who made KHR. That's what probably got your PoT abridged taken off DL.
-Main Theme: It is loud. This suddenly blares out and hurts my ears. Other than that the audio wasn't too bad.The actual voideo you had for it kind of sucked. It seems like you took just a few crappy chunks of it and used it. Way too much I-Pin and the part with Lambo (yes, I got the joke)was just too much while at the same time too little. And you actally decide to use those two when there are better ones? Ooh, and the sound fading at the end just doesn't work for me.
-End Theme: Oh you bastard. Well if I'm rick rolled then you lose the game. Anyway, the credits went by kind of quickly but still went pretty smoothly with the video you had. And get a better font color. Blue may have looked better with the gray background.
-Video quality: No problems here.
-Audio quality: Work on it some parts are pretty bad. Also, 2:42? lolwut?
-Music: Suit the moments fairly well. When Tsuna was being hit the the Deathperation bullet it seemed a bit overdone though like with Lambo in the main theme.
-Dubbing: For a few parts you yourself need to put more emotion into it. The voices are just plain stale at some parts. And your synching wasn't very good at some parts.
Tsuna: Wasn't too bad. Your voice suited him fine. I just think it'd be funnier if he sounded demonic while in Dying Will mode.
Reborn: The beginning with him was horrible. Accent had its moments but broke away quite a bit. Gangster reborn was much better but broke away a little bit. At the end you seemed to go back to Italian Reborn. B*TCH PICK AN ACCENT! But neither were really working out too well for me.
Kyoko: I'm just putting this in here to say the first time wasn't very good. The second time with her though was pretty good. I don't know if it suited Kyoko that well though. But it was still a very good girl voice.
Tsuna's mom: I don't know why I included this but ehhh...not bad. Not bad.
Gokudera: Meh. Wasn't bad. Are you voicing him or is there somebody a bit better? It wasn't bad. Don't get me wrong. It just wasn't as good as I felt it could be with him. But the synching with him was really bad which may be my big problem with it.
Extras: Accents kind of sucked. They were very stale Just because they're extras doesn't mean you shouldn't put effort in them.
-Comedy: Okay, the serious...ish sh*t. This is where it matters most. Don't ignore everything else though. It was meh. Comedy was just meh. Like always there are those few good jokes that just went with everything pretty well and there's the jokes that could be better by just a little bit more work. Some things were meh. "TAKE IT OFF!" That could have been better if you had better timing and maybe used it a bit later. ex. Not have used TAKE IT OFF in the street but keep it in the classroom. And then HE TOOK IT OFF would have been perfect after the match.

I'm sure you'll get better as you do more and more of these. I give it a 3/5. I will be waiting for the next episode though.

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I ACTUALLY READ IT ALL

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[quote name='Desu the Finale' timestamp='1313371062' post='5443514']
This is no status DL. I can go all out with this review.

Please note: I have already watched all of it and understand that you did pretty much everything and that trhey'll be doing their roles in the following episodes.

-Copyright: Put the copyright in the beginning not the end. Mention the actual person who made KHR. That's what probably got your PoT abridged taken off DL.

[b]I put it in the description too, so no problems there. And you just have to say it DOESN"T belong to you. Not specifically who it belongs to.[/b]

-Main Theme: It is loud. This suddenly blares out and hurts my ears. Other than that the audio wasn't too bad.The actual voideo you had for it kind of sucked. It seems like you took just a few crappy chunks of it and used it. Way too much I-Pin and the part with Lambo (yes, I got the joke)was just too much while at the same time too little. And you actally decide to use those two when there are better ones? Ooh, and the sound fading at the end just doesn't work for me.

[b]You got me there. I actually noticed this, albeit late. WAY too much I-Pin, and some too much Lambo. =P but the end is kewl, rite? ;D[/b]

-End Theme: Oh you bastard. Well if I'm rick rolled then you lose the game.

[b]XDD[/b]

Anyway, the credits went by kind of quickly but still went pretty smoothly with the video you had. And get a better font color. Blue may have looked better with the gray background.

[b]I SHALL TAKE THAT ADVICE. <3 no seriously, I wanted matching font color and blue MIGHT just work.[/b]

-Video quality: No problems here.

[b]:'D[/b]

-Audio quality: Work on it some parts are pretty bad. Also, 2:42? lolwut?

[b]It'll get better, and there'll be less scratching of the mic. =3 also, 2:42 was gibberish. Pure gibberish.[/b]

-Music: Suit the moments fairly well. When Tsuna was being hit the the Deathperation bullet it seemed a bit overdone though like with Lambo in the main theme.

[b]Blame 20thCB for that. ;D[/b]

-Dubbing: For a few parts you yourself need to put more emotion into it. The voices are just plain stale at some parts. And your synching wasn't very good at some parts.

[b]Synching was the fact I am a novice at mixing xD Emotion into lines...honestly, I think with Tsuna I did a pretty fine job...but...I'l keep that in mind =D Plus, more emotion will be added as moments call for more emotion ;D[/b]

Tsuna: Wasn't too bad. Your voice suited him fine. I just think it'd be funnier if he sounded demonic while in Dying Will mode.

[b]That is a good idea. But I didn't want to see too....idk...weird O.o Thanks tho, I also felt my voice suited him X3[/b]

Reborn: The beginning with him was horrible.

[b]It really was...[/b]

Accent had its moments but broke away quite a bit. Gangster reborn was much better but broke away a little bit.

[b]He was Gangsta Reborn from the beginning. But...see.... it'll be revealed in episode 2 that he was just FAKING a gangsta accent, and is instead a mafioso. AKA, he's not a perfect gangsta. :3[/b]

At the end you seemed to go back to Italian Reborn. B*TCH PICK AN ACCENT!

[b]Explanation above :3[/b]

But neither were really working out too well for me.

[b]Good thing Fuse is Mafioso Reborn then XD[/b]

Kyoko: I'm just putting this in here to say the first time wasn't very good. The second time with her though was pretty good. I don't know if it suited Kyoko that well though. But it was still a very good girl voice.

[b]Thanks =D And yeah, funny thing, Kyoko's first lines were recorded AFTER her second ones...like...months after....so probably gonna sound different xD[/b]

Tsuna's mom: I don't know why I included this but ehhh...not bad. Not bad.

[b]XDDDD[/b]

Gokudera: Meh. Wasn't bad. Are you voicing him or is there somebody a bit better? It wasn't bad. Don't get me wrong. It just wasn't as good as I felt it could be with him. But the synching with him was really bad which may be my big problem with it.

[b]Synching has been explained; I suck at it xD Gokudera's voice...IDK, seeing as he had such a small cameo in this, it was hard to characterize his voice. but in dramatic moments you can bet he'll rock the house.[/b]

Extras: Accents kind of sucked. They were very stale Just because they're extras doesn't mean you shouldn't put effort in them.

[b]I DID put effort. But extras are MEANT to have all sorts of silly accents XD[/b]

-Comedy: Okay, the serious...ish sh*t. This is where it matters most. Don't ignore everything else though. It was meh. Comedy was just meh. Like always there are those few good jokes that just went with everything pretty well and there's the jokes that could be better by just a little bit more work. Some things were meh. "TAKE IT OFF!" That could have been better if you had better timing and maybe used it a bit later. ex. Not have used TAKE IT OFF in the street but keep it in the classroom. And then HE TOOK IT OFF would have been perfect after the match.

[b]Not my territory (A20th scripted) so can't reply XD[/b]

I'm sure you'll get better as you do more and more of these. I give it a 3/5. I will be waiting for the next episode though.

[b][b]YAAAAY X33[/b]
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