♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 15, 2010 Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 [center] [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/1567/142021e.jpg[/img] [i]When this card is Normal Summoned, Banish 1 card in your Graveyard. When this card attacks or is attacked, send the top card of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard. During your Main Phase, you can remove this card from play to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Vicious Archithan" monster that is currently removed from play.[/i][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 15, 2010 Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 [quote]When this card is Normal Summoned, [u]Banish[/u] 1 card in your Graveyard. When this card attacks or is attacked, send the top card of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard. During your Main Phase, you can remove this card from play to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Vicious Archithan" monster that is currently removed from play.[/quote] Is banish part of the new OCG @_@? Anyway Name is great and the pic is awesome. Effect is also very good [s]but i think it could use a drawback or at least a tone down[/s] Actually now that i think about it, it probably wont last more than 1 attack so i guess its pretty balanced. Overall 8.5/10 Sorry for the bland review Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 It's fine. But no Banish was made up by Liam because we were trying to think of a way to shorted the unnecesserally long "Remove from play" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted September 15, 2010 Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 Banish as in RFP? Add to the mill effect [i]"If the sent card is a monster, this card gains 200 x the Level of the sent monster"[/i]? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 Um... You do know that this card is mine right? If so, can you explain to me why you're requesting I change [b]MY[/b] cards effect with something of yours? I take suggestions not requests. The effect is fine as it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted September 15, 2010 Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 [quote name='♥Łövëły Ċ.Ċ♥' timestamp='1284512536' post='4628133'] Um... You do know that this card is mine right? If so, can you explain to me why you're requesting I change [b]MY[/b] cards effect with something of yours? I take suggestions not requests. The effect is fine as it is. [/quote] That was a suggestion...I don't have a reason to request that you turn your card into my own exact image. If I was aiming to do so, I'd request it be part of an existing Archetype, and re-tool it to break that Archetype. I like to throw ideas into the open. Nothing more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted September 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 Sorry then, my mistake. The way you had it phrased it sounded as though you were telling me to do it and not suggesting. My mistake. Thank you for the suggestion but I was aiming for it to just be a mundane card. No speciality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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