the divine exorcist

[Da kid FAT]

I based my card on exorcism (the carving of demons from the soul, a lot of this was in the bible) these are my cards hope you like them plz comment


[spoiler=The Divine exorcist] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/4407/100060.jpg[/img]
Lore: this card must be summoned by using the spell card divine calling
during your main phase you can negate the effect of a spell or effect monster card this card will also gain 200 ATK and DEF for every spell card in your graveyard [/spoiler]



[spoiler= The Divine calling] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/4407/100060.jpg[/img]
Lore: This card is used to ritual summon the divine exorcist when you discard this card put it at the bottom of the deck if it is destroyed remove it from play to summon the divine exorcist you must destroy all spell cards on your field and in your hand [/spoiler]



plz comment and rate

[TheMan]

[b]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell "Divine Calling". During your Main Phase, you can negate the effect of Spell or Effect Monster Card. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for each Spell Card in your Graveyard.[/b]

And the Divine Calling...pfff I really can't correct that OCG, not that I can't, I really have no time :/


I'm not a real fan of Ritual Monsters, but what I can say this is OP'd for Ritual Monster. Maybe, lower its ATK and DEF by 500-600 and its Level by 1?

6/10

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

OCG errors all throughout, so I'll help here.

The Divine Exorcist: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Divine Calling". Once per turn during your Main Phase you can negate the effect of a Spell or Monster Effect your opponent controls. Once per turn you can remove from play 1 Spell Card in your Graveyard. If you activate this effect, this card gains 200 ATK x the number of Spell Cards in your Graveyard.

Divine Calling: This card is used to Ritual Summon "The Divine Exorcist". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 9 or more from the field or your hand.

You'll notice I also changed/dropped some stuff. That is to make these cards less OP'd. The first pic is alright (not what I would choose but alright) and the second pic is meh, it [s]needs to[/s] should be changed. Other than that it is a somewhat original idea, it adds to the currently growing Ritual archetypes that are coming out.

For better pictures, use DeviantArt (although that is probably what you used, cuz I've used that Divine Exorcist pic before myself), Pixiv (Japanese website), Photobucket, Jazin Kay's profile (huge storage of cards, PM me if you need help getting to it), etc.

For OCG problems later on, use existing cards and the cards others created, especially those people with 4 or more stars. Welcome to YCM!

[Da kid FAT]

ill take it in mind thanks for the replies

[moppmoppmopp]

The divine exorcist has à overused pic and the ocg is bad.