Azwolop Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 I return with another Choice monster! this one being the more powerful of the 1, i've already shown! As i said, he's Powerful, and probably overpowered! i know the choices on him are a little more over the top than usual, but i tried too make them even [align=center]When this card is summoned, flip a coin, if heads, your opponent must choose the ATK of this card from one of the following choices. If the result is tails you choose. The following effects are activated depending on the ATK chosen.• 1000 this card cannot be destroyed in battle. At each of your Draw Phases you may draw 1 extra card at the cost of 100 Life Points.• 2000 each time this card destroys a monster, increase your Life Points by 200.• 3000 if this card declares an Attack, it is unable to declare an Attack on your next Battle Phase.• 4000 this card may only Attack on an odd number of the turn count, if a Spell card is activated during your Battle Phase, decrease this card's Attack by 2500 until your next Draw Phase.[/align] Ta dahhhh xD Oh and with his last effect, i know its prob gunna raise some questions, but yeah, i know people probably don't do this with real life dueling, but in all of the games i've noticed a thing either on the top or in the corner of the duel screen, which tells you what turn it is, and how many turns have passed, e.g if you'd just started it would be like turn 1, so i thought why not try it out. so his effect, it only allows him too Attack on an Odd numbered turn, if you still dont understand just say and i'll explain in more detail xD Comments would be appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 I return with another Choice monster! this one being the more powerful of the 1, i've already shown! As i said, he's Powerful, and probably overpowered! i know the choices on him are a little more over the top than usual, but i tried too make them even [align=center]When this card is summoned, flip a coin, if heads, your opponent must choose the ATK of this card from one of the following choices. If the result is tails you choose. The following effects are activated depending on the ATK chosen.• 1000 this card cannot be destroyed in battle. At each of your Draw Phases you may draw 1 extra card at the cost of 100 Life Points.• 2000 each time this card destroys a monster, increase your Life Points by 200.• 3000 if this card declares an Attack, it is unable to declare an Attack on your next Battle Phase.• 4000 this card may only Attack on an odd number of the turn count, if a Spell card is activated during your Battle Phase, decrease this card's Attack by 2500 until your next Draw Phase.[/align] Ta dahhhh xD Oh and with his last effect, i know its prob gunna raise some questions, but yeah, i know people probably don't do this with real life dueling, but in all of the games i've noticed a thing either on the top or in the corner of the duel screen, which tells you what turn it is, and how many turns have passed, e.g if you'd just started it would be like turn 1, so i thought why not try it out. so his effect, it only allows him too Attack on an Odd numbered turn, if you still dont understand just say and i'll explain in more detail xD Comments would be appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 The first few sentences could be reworded. When puting a card flipping in your effect, they have to be in separate sentences. Example :Flip 1 coin. If the result is heads, destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. If the result is tails....Good job though! I hope you make more! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 The first few sentences could be reworded. When puting a card flipping in your effect, they have to be in separate sentences. Example :Flip 1 coin. If the result is heads, destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. If the result is tails....Good job though! I hope you make more! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 The 4000 ATK part is overpowered. and a few OCG errors. Maybe make it so that it could only attack every three turns if it has 4000 Atk or that it can't inflict battle damage? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 The 4000 ATK part is overpowered. and a few OCG errors. Maybe make it so that it could only attack every three turns if it has 4000 Atk or that it can't inflict battle damage? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 i like it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 i like it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 picture is very good, little overpowered perhaps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 picture is very good, little overpowered perhaps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 the i changed the 4000 ATK part, so now it is left hanging there with 1500 ATK during your opponents turn, better? and thanks Dj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 the i changed the 4000 ATK part, so now it is left hanging there with 1500 ATK during your opponents turn, better? and thanks Dj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 Nice Card Man =) No Problems I See 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 Nice Card Man =) No Problems I See 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 thanks man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 thanks man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 Great card, i really like it; brilliant picture and effect.9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 Great card, i really like it; brilliant picture and effect.9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 thanks man No Problem =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 thanks man No Problem =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 great card 9/10Good Job!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 great card 9/10Good Job!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 It's cool ^_^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 It's cool ^_^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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