Nightmare Demon

[GundamFreedom]

Hey guys. I have a new card made while I was bored. For some strange reason, I keep saying that the darkness shall rule. So I just made this card. Please check for OCG and rate it.
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Nightmare Demon's Lore: 1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Fiend-Type monsters
The original ATK and DEF of this card are each equal to the combined original ATK and DEF of the Synchro Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon it. Once per turn, you can inflict 300 damage to your opponent. Then discard 1 Fiend-Type monster.

[Stoopid1]

1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Fiend-Type monsters
The original ATK and DEF of this card are each equal to the combined original ATK and DEF of the Synchro Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon it. Once per turn, you can discard 1 Fiend-Type monster to inflict 300 damage to your opponent.


That second effect isn't very good at all, unless you're going for some kind of Fabled or Dark World theme. (It doesn't work on dark world monsters because it's an activation cost, not an effect. If that's the case, you can avoid that by rewording it to, "Once per turn, you can inflict 300 damage to your opponent. Then discard 1 Fiend-Type monster." )

Oh ya, and monsters with ? stats only have 1 question mark, not 4.

[GundamFreedom]

Thanks for the edits. Well, it has been a long time since I made a new card, so I might be a bit rusty.

[crossader]

[quote name='Stoopid1' timestamp='1284781139' post='4635995']

That second effect isn't very good at all, unless you're going for some kind of Fabled or Dark World theme. (It doesn't work on dark world monsters because it's an activation cost, not an effect. If that's the case, you can avoid that by rewording it to, "Once per turn, you can inflict 300 damage to your opponent. Then discard 1 Fiend-Type monster." )
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[color="#800080"][size="3"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]The text says perfectly that discarting a Fiend isn't a cost dude. You inflict damage, then discard a fiend. Is simply perfect for a Fabled and Dark World decks as you said.[/b][/font][/size][/color]

[Stoopid1]

[quote name='crossader' timestamp='1284828983' post='4637214']
[color="#800080"][size="3"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]The text says perfectly that discarting a Fiend isn't a cost dude. [/b][/font][/size][/color]
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That's because the original version of his card said, "Once per turn, you can discard 1 Fiend-Type monster to inflict 300 damage to your opponent." Therefore, it was a cost. That's why I suggested changing it, and he did, hence why the card no longer states that it pays a cost.

That's OK though, I can see why a misunderstanding would be caused here.

[GundamFreedom]

bump.