4 New Synchro Monsters!

[Specter54]

Hey there! My friends and I started this idea off of a doodle. Now we have 4 new monsters, and I was just wondering what people thought of them. They're not exactly set in stone (But they will be eventually, we're writing a fanfic), so don't feel bad about rating them down or up about anything; I just wanted some opinions on them. Also, I'm trying to work on my OCG, but if something's wrong I'd like to know. Thanks!

First up is Mirage Phoenix: LV8 Fire-attribute Winged Beast. 2600 ATK and 2000 DEF

[img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/4918/76135.jpg[/img]
Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
During the End Phase, this card is destroyed. During either player's Standby Phase, you can remove from play one card in your Graveyard to select one other monster in your Graveyard. If you do, Special Summon both this monster and the selected monster to your side of the field. When this card leaves the field, the monster summoned with this card's effect is destroyed.

For the next three, I wouldn't mind alternate names, but Mirage Phoenix won't change.
Anyway, next it's Vallated Tortoise: LV8 Earth-attribute Reptile. 1200 ATK, but 3000 DEF

[img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/4918/76135.jpg[/img]
Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
This card cannot be sent to the Graveyard, unless it is destroyed by battle. The battle position of this card cannot be changed by card effects. At the start of your opponent's Battle Phase, you can select one face-up monster your opponent controls. That monster is changed to attack mode and must attack this turn. Any Battle Damage either player takes from battles involving this card is halved.

Now its Striagent Dragon: also LV8, a WATER dragon with 2700 ATK and 1600 DEF

[img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/4918/76135.jpg[/img]
Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters
This card's effects cannot be negated. Control of this card cannot switch. Neither player can activate more than one Spell or Trap card per turn. If your opponent summons more than one monster during his/her Main Phase(s), discard the top three cards of his/her deck.

And Lastly, the Tempestous Tiger, an WIND Beast. 2200 ATK, 2100 DEF

[img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/4918/76135.jpg[/img]
Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuenr monsters
When this card declares an attack, it gains 800 ATK. When this card is selected as an attack target, it gains 400 ATK and 500 DEF. Once per turn, at any point during either player's turn, you can discard one card to change the battle positions of two monsters on the field.

Remember, evin if they suck, if you tell me why it's a great help.

[moppmoppmopp]

Good cards dude