Silver Knight Rayblade

[Engetsu]

Decided to make a Machine monster for the heck of it. I couldn't think of a good name for it, so I just randomly made up one, which is kinda stupid imo.

1+ Rep to those who give actual [b]constructive [/b]reviews on this card.

Credit image goes to Jazin Kay.

[b]EDIT: [/b]Fixed the OCG.


[img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7119/252705.jpg[/img]


Card Lore

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card only be Special Summoned from your hand or Graveyard by removing 1 Machine-Type monster from your hand and in your Deck from play. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard. If you do, this card can attack twice during the next Battle Phase. Any Battle Damage to both players involving this card becomes 0 the turn you activated this effect.

[moppmoppmopp]

Silver knight rayblade
name: 7/10
pic: 9/10
effect: pretty OP'd, but okay

can i get rep now?

[crossader]

[color="#800080"][size="3"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]Quick fix...[/b][/font][/size][/color]

[i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. [b]This card can only be[/b] Special Summon[b]ed[/b] by removing 1 Machine[b]-t[/b]ype monster from your hand and [b]in [/b]your Deck from play. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard. If you [b]do[/b], this card can attack twice during the [b]next[/b] Battle Phase. [b]A[/b]ny Battle Damage [b]to both players [/b]involving this card becomes 0 [b]the turn you activated this effect[/b]. [/i]

[color="#800080"][size="3"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]The effect is really interesting, and makes a perfect combo with D.D. Scout Plane. You remove from play these 2 and you will get 2 monsters during the End Phase. As always, jazin kay's pics saves the day hehe.

9/10[/b][/font][/size][/color]

[Engetsu]

[quote name='moppmoppmopp' timestamp='1284828114' post='4637151']
Silver knight rayblade
name: 7/10
pic: 9/10
effect: pretty OP'd, but okay

can i get rep now?
[/quote]

It's not that OP'd. Slightly OP'd perhaps, but it's effects all require a cost and have their drawbacks.

Also, asking straight up for a Rep is sorta rude you know.

Anyways I appreciate the review, if somewhat short.

[quote name='crossader' timestamp='1284828138' post='4637153']
[color="#800080"][size="3"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]Quick fix...[/b][/font][/size][/color]

[i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. [b]This card can only be[/b] Special Summon[b]ed[/b] by removing 1 Machine[b]-t[/b]ype monster from your hand and [b]in [/b]your Deck from play. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard. If you [b]do[/b], this card can attack twice during the [b]next[/b] Battle Phase. [b]A[/b]ny Battle Damage [b]to both players [/b]involving this card becomes 0 [b]the turn you activated this effect[/b]. [/i]

[color="#800080"][size="3"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]The effect is really interesting, and makes a perfect combo with D.D. Scout Plane. You remove from play these 2 and you will get 2 monsters during the End Phase. As always, jazin kay's pics saves the day hehe.

9/10[/b][/font][/size][/color]
[/quote]

I'll make the changes immediately.

and thanks for the review

[LRPXD]

"Silver Knight Rayblade"

Name: Pure Awsomeness, I like it. 1.8/2
Pic: Reminds me of a Gundam which I like, fits it's awsome name. Kinda blurry but that's a minor complaint. 1.7/2
OCG: Cant really comment since u know I sux @ it but looking @ this card didnt spot any mistakes. 2/2
Effect: The ability to attack twice by discarding 1 card from your hand, meh I think you can do better than that, but it's extremely useful like Crossader said and it's easy to summon. 1.5/2
Balance: It's balanced IMO when this card inflicts battle damage it's 0 and this card can only be Special Summon by removing 1 Machine-Type monster from your Hand and Deck kinda too easy to Summon but your discarding 1 machine monster from so it's fine. 1.8/2

Overall: 8.8 good job!

[Engetsu]

Bump (and only bump)

Anymore comments?

[Squirrel Girl]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Machine-[b]T[/b]ype monster from your hand and in your Deck from play. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can discard 1 card (took away this part cause it is unnecessary). If you do, this card can attack twice during the next Battle Phase. [b]All battle damage from battles involving this card becomes 0.[/b]

That is the most correct ocg...

The effect is balanced, cause you lose 1 card from your hand. Then this card can attack twice, and your opponent take no damage from those battles

The pic is great but name is not so good but I will give it a 8/10 change ocg and I give it a 8.5/10

[Engetsu]

[quote name='^_^AxManBoy^_^' timestamp='1284935199' post='4641597']
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Machine-[b]T[/b]ype monster from your hand and in your Deck from play. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can discard 1 card (took away this part cause it is unnecessary). If you do, this card can attack twice during the next Battle Phase. [b]All battle damage from battles involving this card becomes 0.[/b]
[/quote]

The battle damage 0 thing only applies when you use the double attack effect, so the way you worded it with that change, would make it do 0 damage every time it battled regardless.

[Squirrel Girl]

[b]If you used this cards effect, all battle damage from battles involving this card becomes 0.[/b]

There...

[Engetsu]

[quote name='^_^AxManBoy^_^' timestamp='1284935637' post='4641625']
[b]If you used this cards effect, all battle damage from battles involving this card becomes 0.[/b]
[/quote]

Again, how it's worded, it would mean this card would do 0 damage every time after activating the effect. It should say like "during the turn you activated this effect" (like I have it now) or something similar to avoid confusion with this card's effect.

I really do appreciate you trying to help though, but I think the OCG for the last part of this card's effect is fine.

Since you took the time to try to help me, I'll give you a +Rep.