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YCM: New Order


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I'd like to say that users WILL be used without permission and I don't care if you complain ;) but users who would like to be in this are free to post that they want to and I'll decide if you'll fit in. Anyways...

Prologue
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[Log #1]

Its been 5 years since the females of YCM took over. Crab Helmet finally succeeded in her plans to take over YCM. And if you are reading this and wondering 'How?' then continue on reading. She was able to achieve the title of administrator after her years of being a dedicated member of YCM, though I was a runner up for the title since what we were having was a voting competition. Her and I were tied and then came that one last vote. The deciding vote by Opalmoon. Then havoc struck; YCMaker and Falling Pizza appeared as regular members and Opalmoon and Crab Helmet appeared as Administrators. I was in disbelief to find out all male staff were also regular members. I sent Crab Helmet a PM. She responded with this "I have finally achieved what I have wanted now females will rule YCM." Then I blacked out. I then found we were inside YCM's true form. And yes [i]we[/i] as in other members of YCM. We had no idea what was going on, but later found out to be in the most spammed section 'Introductions'. Then shadow-like figures appeared. Later to find out those were the true form of the spam the section had condensed into one. The spam attacked some members. The ones that did get attacked were never seen again. Now I must find out about this world of YCM, how we got here, how to survive, and ultimately how to get out. All I knew is that Crab Helmet was our enemy.

[right]-JoshIcy[/b][/right]

[spoiler=Chapter 1: The Return]

"Josh the scouts haven't come back. Should we intervene and look for them?"

"No, we can't. It was their choice to scout around YCM, besides I'm pretty sure they'll be alright." I replied. I stared at my comrade, Yankee. "Yankee is there anything that you have to say?" I questioned him to find out why he asked that question.

"Well, what if the Spam attacked them? Then we would have to send 2 more people and we can't afford to lose anyone." Yankee said as he walked in a circle. "Josh could you leave." He asked somewhat politely.

"Sure." I said leaving. Our camp ground, which wasn't so hidden, was where we all stayed waiting each day for the scouts to return with more information for me to log. So far things I have logged were the fact that every member could use their avatar as (what I called it) a Bio-Fighter. We could use our avatar's moves, which were unknown how many moves they know, and combine it with our own mind and fight back. Then I heard a small yell in the distance, it was the 2 scouters.

"Josh...Josh!" It was Archwing. "I-" He appeared to have de-pixelated a little on his right arm and part of his chest. "There are much more worse things than the Spam...." Then he showed what happened to the 2nd scouter, who was on his back. "...The true forms of trolls, they are actually the negative energy within a YCM member, just like the Spam. But the Trolls are far worse because they ARE the YCM member's doppelganger, but with a negative twist." He then went down on his knees. "I'm not bowing, I'm de-pixelating just like him..." Archwing then dropped the other member on the ground. His body was sliced in half, Archwing's legs started to disappear. "Hey if I go down now, I'm going to be watching..." His body slammed on the ground.

"Archwing..." Then I saw the other person's body. "That's Lyfe..." I grabbed my notebook and wrote what Archwing said. "J-Max!" I yelled. "Get them fixed up..."

He looked at them. "Josh, you could have called me earlier..I mean look at them.."

After seeing the two members recovered I returned to my tent and grabbed all my notes, reread them, and came to a conclusion. "We'll have to return to the Introduction forum."

The next day I called out all the members. "Today my friends, we will return to the place where we began." I yelled out. "And with the knowledge stored within my notes and the help of the scouters we can get YCM back." I then was looking around for Yankee. I looked left and right. "Where is Yankee?" I asked them.

Archwing stood up. "I saw him while I was returning, I thought he was the next scout. He was traveling with someone else." Archwing then looked down.

"He left? With who Archwing?" I needed to know what had happened to Yankee.

"Someone wearing a cloak. Maybe he has already decided to go join Crab's army..." Archwing sat back down.

"Someone wearing a cloak..." I ignored the thought of betrayal. "We'll just continue on without him...." I looked down the same way Archwing did. "...I'll need atleast 20 of you to stay here and the rest to continue on with me." Then I looked at the maybe 50 people who stepped out of their chairs. "So you guys are willing to stay?" I looked at who was there. Archwing was one. "Archwing I want you in charge of camp." I signaled the others to follow me. Still a question alluded my mind. What was Yankee up to?[/spoiler]
Its not going to be like males VS females alright, well sort of. Just to let you know I have been planning this fan fic for atleast 3 days and this is what I got with my limited time.

Tell me what you think/Foe Ficting ok/ And yes Icy will be the protagonist while Crab Helmet is the antagonist. All other members are supporters and I probably will not make an entrance until later in the fic. Hope you liked it.

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I didn't like it.

While it may be fiction, it has to have some logic. We don't get and promote mods by voting. I also don't like the idea of females taking over. It's not because I'm a guy. I wouldn't like the idea of all guys taking over either. The idea that one gender will take over the other is just crazy. Especially in YCM, since the number of girls is lower than the number of guys.

Also, if Icy got demoted from super, what makes you think he'd be runner up for admin?(no offense)
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I didn't like it.

While it may be fiction, it has to have some logic. We don't get and promote mods by voting. I also don't like the idea of females taking over. It's not because I'm a guy. I wouldn't like the idea of all guys taking over either. The idea that one gender will take over the other is just crazy. Especially in YCM, since the number of girls is lower than the number of guys.

Also, if Icy got demoted from super, what makes you think he'd be runner up for admin?(no offense)
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Its Crab Helmet's plan taken into effect :o and yes I do know that....I'm still trying to revamp the thing but I'll need some comments first.

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