shakugan no shana cards

[Chaoswargreymon]

[b]are they good?
[img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/9048/shanae.jpg[/img]
effect: During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can place 1 Burning Rage Counter on this card (max.10). Once per turn, you can remove 2 Burning Rage Counters from this card to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. When there are 10 Burning Rage Counters on this card, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Shana the Blazing Eyed Hunter" from your hand or Deck.

[img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/5215/shanatheblazingeyedhunt.jpg[/img]
effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Shana" you control. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. This card gains 200 ATK for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 FIRE monster in your Graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field.[/b]

[WolfFan16]

For future reference the text on a card is called it's Lore.
Shana: During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you [u]may[/u] place 1 Burning Rage Counter on this card (max.10). Once per turn, you [u]may[/u] remove 2 Burning Rage Counters from this card to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. When there are 10 Burning Rage Counters on this card, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Shana the Blazing Eyed Hunter" from your hand or Deck.
Not much to do on that card.
Shana tBEH:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or [b]S[/b]et. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by[u] the effect of "Shana"[/u]. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. This card gains 200 ATK for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you [u]may[/u] remove from play 1 FIRE monster in your Graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field.
Again small improvements but any ATk or DEF cannot have anything other than a 5 or 0 in the tens place. i think you mean 2200 DEF or even 200 im not sure.

[Chaoswargreymon]

[quote name='WolfFan16' timestamp='1284864456' post='4639093']
For future reference the text on a card is called it's Lore.
Shana: During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you [u]may[/u] place 1 Burning Rage Counter on this card (max.10). Once per turn, you [u]may[/u] remove 2 Burning Rage Counters from this card to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. When there are 10 Burning Rage Counters on this card, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Shana the Blazing Eyed Hunter" from your hand or Deck.
Not much to do on that card.
Shana tBEH:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or [b]S[/b]et. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by[u] the effect of "Shana"[/u]. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. This card gains 200 ATK for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you [u]may[/u] remove from play 1 FIRE monster in your Graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field.
Again small improvements but any ATk or DEF cannot have anything other than a 5 or 0 in the tens place. i think you mean 2200 DEF or even 200 im not sure.
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your first correction for both shanas is wrong, it's "CAN" not "may" and a monster can have any number in the tens place look at [url="http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20061107023957/yugioh/images/3/3a/CastleofDarkIllusionsMRD-NA-C-UE.jpg"]castle of dark illusions[/url], and [url="http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20080217145323/yugioh/images/6/63/DarkChimeraV7-JP-C.jpg"]dark chimera[/url]

[Chaoswargreymon]

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[Chaoswargreymon]

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[LRPXD]

[color="#FF0000"]I'll b nice and rate these cards:

[b]"Shana"[/b]

[b]Pic: 1.6/2[/b] It's great you can c her pretty face and it's not blurry yay!
[b]OCG: 2/2[/b] By what I see, dont c much much with it understood her effect, your OCG is nearly flawless.
[b]Effect: 1.5/2[/b] Her 1st Effect is pretty useful removing 2 Burning Rage Counters to destroy a Spell/Trap Card but her 2nd effect removing 10 Burning Rage Counters to Special Summon "Shana The Blazing Eyed Hunter" kinda difficult to get 10 counters don't cha think having to wait 10 turns just to Summon 1 monster, Most people would just use those counters to keep destroying Spell/Trap Cards in the field. [b]Heres my suggestion: "Each time you remove a Burning Rage Counter from this card, increase this card's level equal to the Burning Rage Counters removed. When this card's level is at 10 or higher, Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Shana The Blazing Eyed Hunter" from your hand or Deck." Easier to Special Summon "Shana The Blazing Eyed Hunter".[/b]
[b]Balance: 2/2 [/b]I say it's balance getting a Burning Rage Counter each turn and using 2 of those counters to destroy a Spell/Trap Card on the field. Powerful and Balanced.
[b]Creativity/Originality: 1.4/2[/b] You get points 4 originality since no1 I think created a card based off her, but your creativity I could c you hav alot off but I think you can expand on this card's effect rather than just using counters to destroy a Spell/Trap card mayb make this card hav other uses for the counters or something or whatever it's your card.

[b]Overall: 8.5[/b] great and useful card but missing a little something to make this card perfect.[/color]

I'll Rate the 2nd card later.

[LRPXD]

[b]"Shana The Blazing Eyed Hunter"[/b]

[b]Pic: 1.8[/b] Looks great, the moon in the backround is awsome. I found a better pic though PM me if you want to use it.
[b]OCG: 2/2[/b] meh
[b]Effect: 1.7/2[/b] Very powerful not being effected by card effects, can destroy a monster each turn by removing 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard. The ATK increase isnt neccessary IMO but it's a nice touch to beat monster's who hav high ATK and cant b destroyed by monster's effect.
[b]Balance: 1.9/2[/b] Pretty Balance this card is difficult to Summon "Shana" has to get 10 counters, meaning waiting 10 turns to Special Summon this card. Not sure if "Shana" can stay on the field 4 that long make the Summoning Conditions 4 this card a little easier.
[b]Creativity/Orginality: 1.3/2[/b] Somewhat Creative because of her summoning conditions, her effects are pretty straightfoward, I was hoping 4 a little more.

[b]Overall: 8.7/10 [/b]

[Astro Dude]

Great work.

[NeosWiseman]

Hey! How have you been? You've been off line like forever!
I like the 2 Shana cards. The OCG is good, the pics are descent, the effects are good. Counter based just like your little sister's
Btw, how's she doing I have seen here around lately either.
I rate your cards 10/10 and moving to the next ones ^^

[Shizuku Oikawa]

Shana reminds me of plenty of other cards, and her effect looks a little bland somehow...
lol, The Blazing Eye Hunter Shana is pretty powerful and awesome. It can probably be combined with Thermal Genex, and Shana is like a FIRE version of Dark Armed Dragon, but harder to Summon, lol
The pics looks slightly decent
9/10

[Chaoswargreymon]

[quote name='NeosWiseman' timestamp='1285509364' post='4656735']
Hey! How have you been? You've been off line like forever!
I like the 2 Shana cards. The OCG is good, the pics are descent, the effects are good. Counter based just like your little sister's
Btw, how's she doing I have seen here around lately either.
I rate your cards 10/10 and moving to the next ones ^^
[/quote]
hey neos^^ i've been doing pretty good. fenrir's on break from card making right now, she'll probably be back on tomorrow with a new archetype. any way,m thanks for the rate