SP0RE Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 I've always had a soft spot for fluffy monsters... [spoiler=Monsters] [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/1688/47480j.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned, you may remove from play 1 "Phluff" monster from your Graveyard to inflict 800 damage to your opponents Life Points. When this card is destroyed you may Special Summon 1 "Fire Puff Token" (Fairy-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/8890/47480i.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned, you may remove from play 1 "Phluff" monster from your Graveyard to destroy 1 monster on the field. When this card is destroyed you may Special Summon 1 "Thunder Puff Token" (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/9532/47480uy.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned, you may remove from play 1 "Phluff" monster from your Graveyard to switch the original ATK and DEF of all monsters on the field. When this card is destroyed change the battle positions of all monsters your opponent controls. (Face-down Defense Position monsters are flipped to face-up Attack Position.) [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/4191/47480v.jpg[/img] When this card is destroyed you may Special Summon 3 "Multi Puff Tokens" (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). [spoiler=Tokens] [IMG]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/4251/firepuff.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8884/thunderpuff.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/7989/multipuff1card.png[/IMG] [img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/746/multipuff2card.png[/img] [img]http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/2447/multipuff3card.png[/img] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells] [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/707/47480q.jpg[/img] Destroy 1 "Phluff" monsters on the field. Special Summon 1 "Phluff" Monster from your Deck, with a different name to the destroyed monster. [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/845/47480w.jpg[/img] Destroy 1 "Phluff" monsters on the field. Add up to 5 removed from play "Phluff" monsters to your Graveyard. After this card is activated, if you added 5 "Phluff" monsters to your Graveyard, it is placed into the Deck (not the Graveyard). Then shuffle the Deck. [/spoiler] Any OCG fixes would be good! I may make some more making more of other elements... All Image credit: ME!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moppmoppmopp Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 I don't see anything wronng with the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SP0RE Posted September 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 [quote name='moppmoppmopp' timestamp='1284842531' post='4637878'] I don't see anything wronng with the OCG [/quote] Thanks... No other comments? Also I've added another Phluff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 they're pretty good, i love these types of things here's a pic you could use [url="http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=blob#/d2kzh8u"]http://browse.devian...q=blob#/d2kzh8u[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SP0RE Posted September 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 [quote name='Galadrien' timestamp='1284843739' post='4637959'] they're pretty good, i love these types of things here's a pic you could use [url="http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=blob#/d2kzh8u"]http://browse.devian...q=blob#/d2kzh8u[/url] [/quote] Nah, I'm trying to get better making images... These will be going on deviant art (eventually) for future peoples! Thanks for finding that image though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 "Fire Phluff" Name: Cute and simple. 1.7/2 Pic: Adorable but the backround kinda doesnt fit the monster I was expecting something more, IDK really. 1.6/2 OCG: Just some mistakes like "When this card is Summoned" you didnt specify what type of summoned, Normal Summoned, Special Summoned or if both just put When this card is Successfully Summoned, *insert effect here* but the rest of your OCG is fine like the tokens good job. 1.6/2 Effect: Kinda Bland but I'm assuming your going to make more "Phluff" monsters so cant really comment if this effect is useful or not, the token effect is nice since you can tribute it. 1.2/2 Balance: The token effect is what saved this card from being underpowered. So I give u. 2/2 Overall: 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SP0RE Posted September 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 [quote name='LRPXD' timestamp='1284844123' post='4637987'] "Fire Phluff" Name: Cute and simple. 1.7/2 Pic: Adorable but the backround kinda doesnt fit the monster I was expecting something more, IDK really. 1.6/2 OCG: Just some mistakes like "When this card is Summoned" you didnt specify what type of summoned, Normal Summoned, Special Summoned or if both just put When this card is Successfully Summoned, *insert effect here* but the rest of your OCG is fine like the tokens good job. 1.6/2 Effect: Kinda Bland but I'm assuming your going to make more "Phluff" monsters so cant really comment if this effect is useful or not, the token effect is nice since you can tribute it. 1.2/2 Balance: The token effect is what saved this card from being underpowered. So I give u. 2/2 Overall: 8.1/10 [/quote] Thanks, I'm not sure you are aware of it, but the OCG of being "Summoned" means "Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or Special Summoned" It's a new shortening, released in 5d's... The backgrounds are because I'm lazy! Spell cards will have nice Backgrounds... Speaking of which... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted September 19, 2010 Report Share Posted September 19, 2010 [quote name='Thunderpants' timestamp='1284844857' post='4638037'] Thanks, I'm not sure you are aware of it, but the OCG of being "Summoned" means "Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or Special Summoned" It's a new shortening, released in 5d's... The backgrounds are because I'm lazy! Spell cards will have nice Backgrounds... Speaking of which... [/quote] Really brand new OCG I heard of it but didn't really look on to it. What type of changes did they make? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SP0RE Posted September 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2010 [quote name='LRPXD' timestamp='1284856176' post='4638681'] Really brand new OCG I heard of it but didn't really look on to it. What type of changes did they make? [/quote] Just a couple of odds and ends, to shortening things... Try looking at some new cards! I was going to make Changer Phluff... But the artwork failed to save... Me is sad But I have added a Dreamer's Dream! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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