yoan103 Posted September 19, 2010 Report Share Posted September 19, 2010 This is my new card, i hope you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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FTW (For The Wynn) Posted September 20, 2010 Report Share Posted September 20, 2010 ...well this is new, an attached image that is full size. Even so, though, I would recommend doing it the right way. See my signature for step by step on how to post cards the right way. Anyway, Pic: 6/10 Not a good pic but it kinda fits the card requirements...kinda... Template: 8/10 Normal Template OCG: 7/10 It needs some work, but it is all small mistakes. For example, standby phase should be Standby Phase and machines should be Machine-type Monsters. Originality/Creativity: 7/10 The idea of powering up machines has been going on for awhile now unfortunately. But this is at least your own spin on it. Playability: 6/10 OP'd (overpowered) to the point of broken. It destroys all cards on your opponent's side of the field (except machines, which while played a lot aren't played that much so it almost isn't a stipulation to worry about) while not effecting your side plus gives your side only machine monsters a power boost and it cannot be destroyed except by monster effect. Needs some kind of balancing costs, plural in this case. For example, discard your hand (at least 3+ cards) and pay 400 Life Points per turn. Overall: 34/50 Good, it is coming along but it still needs some work. Not bad for a newb. Feel free to PM me if you need help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightGuardian1764 Posted September 20, 2010 Report Share Posted September 20, 2010 No attachment -1 Oped. -1 Many Wrong Card Grammar. -1 New Member +0.5 Overall: 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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