Galent_Sail Posted September 19, 2010 Report Share Posted September 19, 2010 My first set of cards. constructive criticism welcome. [spoiler=The First 10][img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore:Once per turn during the battle phase you can roll two dice. If both dice have the numbers 2,4 or 6 increase this monster attack and defence by 200, 400 or 600 ATK and DEF points respectively. [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore:As long as this card remains face up all monsters containing "Dragon" in their name gain a 500 ATK and DEF bonus and are immune to all spell, trap and monster effects that designate a card. [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore:Powerful and deadly, this beast is better off avoided. [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/663/286309d.jpg[/img] Lore:When this card is normal summoned, flip summoned or special summoned you can pay 1000 life points to special summon one level 6 or lower monster containing "Dragon" in it's name to the field in face up ATK position. [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore:During your main phase you can flip one coin and call. If you call right you can destroy one monster on your opponents side of the field and inflict 500 damage to your opponents life points. [img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore: Known for his determination and incredibly strong hide this behemoth can take humongous amounts of punishment. [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/5636/286309o.jpg[/img] Lore: Fast and merciless this monster is definitely a force to be reckoned with. [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore: This card can only be special summoned by the effect of the card "Seal Breaker Kurohime". When this card destroys a monster the destroyed monster is removed from play and may not return during the remainder of the duel. When this card is destroyed you can sacrifice one card on your side of the field to special summon this card in face up defence position with 2000 ATK and DEF points. this can only be done once. When this card is summoned you can pick one of two options: • Pay 2000 life point to destroy all cards on your opponent’s side of the field. • Pay 1000 life points to remove all card in your opponent’s hand from play. [img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/2285/286309z.jpg[/img] Lore:This card is used to special summon Forbidden Dragon - Suzaku the Bound. You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal 11 or more. [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/3070/286309x.jpg[/img] Lore:"Forbidden Dragon - Suzaku the Bound" + "Dragon Child - Hatasus the Scarred" As long as this card remains face up on the field increase you life points by 1000 in each of your standby phases.[/spoiler] [spoiler=10 more][img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/6782/286309a.jpg[/img] Lore: Pay 500 life points to negate an attack to this monster [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/6184/286309e.jpg[/img] Lore: Pay 250 life points to summon one "Mountain Dragon - Gyrstorr the Weak" from your deck or hand to the feild in face up DEF position. [img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore: "Mountain Dragon - Gyrstorr the Weak" + Dragon Maiden - Reciela the Kindly" + any other non-tuner monster This monsters ATK is equal to the combined ATK of the tributed monsters. This monster's DEF is equal to the combined DEF of the tributed monsters. Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand to destroy one card on the field. [img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/6408/286309f.jpg[/img] Lore: Special summon one Dragon type card from your hand to the field in face-up ATK position. [img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore: Destroy one monster on your opponent's side of the field. [img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/9290/286309t.jpg[/img] Lore: Filled with loathing this beast strikes with great fury. [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore: Special summon one "Necromancer Dragon - Sy'Thull the Twisted" from your graveyard, hand or deck in face up ATK position [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore: Increase the ATK of one Dragon type monster by 700 points. [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is summoned successfully place 3 counters on this card. 1 token is destroyed every time this card is attacked. These counters must be destroyed before this monster can be attacked. [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/1810/286309w.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is summoned remove it from play. Three turns later this card is special summoned to your side of the field with 2000 ATK and DEF.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Another 10][img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/8792/286309b.jpg[/img] Lore: Hiding in the clouds this gentle beast was long believed to be a mirage. [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/715/286309v.jpg[/img] Lore: Known asn the one eyed dragon he is one of the greatest samurais of all time. [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/6782/286309a.jpg[/img] Lore: Only equipable to "Date Masamune - One-eyed Warrior'. Boosts ATK by 1500 points. [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/4756/286309h.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by tributing "Date Masamune - One-eyed warrior" equipped with "Draco Katana" and paying 2000 life points. Once per turn you can randomly discard one card from your hand to the graveyard to remove two cards on the field from play. [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/3070/286309x.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card destroys a monster your opponent randomly discards one card from his hand to the graveyard. You then draw one card. [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/9290/286309t.jpg[/img] Lore: Boost the ATK and DEF of all Dragon-type monsters by 400 points. [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/4756/286309h.jpg[/img] Lore: Pay 500 life points. Destroy one spell or trap on the field. [img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore: Pay all but one of your life points. Seven turns later you win the game. This effect cannot be negated. [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore: During your battle phase only you may pay 500 lifepoints to increase this monster's ATK by 1000 points. [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/9882/286309.jpg[/img] Lore: Inflict 1500 points of damage to your opponent's life points.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SleepyBrown Posted September 20, 2010 Report Share Posted September 20, 2010 sweet cards. 8/10 in my opinion, Ancient Dragon is OP'd. (over powered). but either than that cool cards. check out my first set at http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/221385-dragon-spirit-edition/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galent_Sail Posted September 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2010 10 more up comment and review plz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Qw Posted September 20, 2010 Report Share Posted September 20, 2010 Wow 9/10. really nice cards, good pics 2 where you get them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galent_Sail Posted September 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 [quote name='Lord of Qw' timestamp='1285015681' post='4643771'] Wow 9/10. really nice cards, good pics 2 where you get them? [/quote] Thanks, most of the pics were from DeviantArt but a few were from other places, can't remember where Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galent_Sail Posted September 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 This is awesome man! I'll give you an 8/10. Your pics are awesome and the effect is pretty balance but Ancient Dragon is still overpowered. I don't really talk about OCG but I don't think you have any or maybe that's just me. Anyway, also check out my set man, please and thank you!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da kid FAT Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Nice cards there are no problems so i give you 8/10 although i've seen many before Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snow_wolfyII Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 It is a pretty decent set. Mind your OCG grammar. For your ATK and DEF they should have only one question mark. For your coin flip it should usually be 'heads' or 'tails' not 'if you call right' 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galent_Sail Posted October 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 [quote name='snow_wolfyII' timestamp='1286107323' post='4675591'] It is a pretty decent set. Mind your OCG grammar. For your ATK and DEF they should have only one question mark. For your coin flip it should usually be 'heads' or 'tails' not 'if you call right' 7/10 [/quote] thanks for the advice, will be sure to remember that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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