Gemini Knights - Set 5/??

[PshyKo]

[center][color="#FF0000"][size="5"][font="Impact"]Thesse are my first cards well first set of cards and I'm kinda getting used to everything now so enjoy and Let me know if their is anything I can do better[/font][/size][/color]

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credit: ::тǿρħєя: - Holo Sheet
LeoMence - Gold Rare Sheet
Wanderley - Pic

- I Did do the Holo Sheet and Gold Rare so Credit goes to me for putting 'em on -


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Lore: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:
● If this card attacks a Defense Position monster your opponent controls, destroy all Defense Position monsters your opponent controls after damage calculation. If this card attacks a Attack Position monster your opponent controls, destroy this Card. If this card is attacked by a Attack Position monster your opponent controls, Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.


White Knight - Hope


[img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/2226/286672.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:
● If this card attacks, it loses 300 ATK during the Damage Step only. Also, if this card is destroyed by your opponent and sent to the Graveyard, activate by sending 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard. Select 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster in your Graveyard and add it to your hand.



Red Knight - Fury

[img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/4231/286672y.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:
● When this card attacks or is attacked, your opponent draws 1 card. Reveal that card, and based on its type apply the proper effect: ● Monster: End the Battle Phase. ● Spell: You can change this card's attack to a direct attack. ● Trap: This monster is Destroyed and removed from play.


Green Knight - Life

[img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/6599/286672k.jpg[/img]


Lore: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster
with this effect:
Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points for each EARTH attribute Monster in your Graveyard.


Blue Knight - Gero

[img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/2226/286672.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:
● When your opponent activates a Spell Card, you can select 1 Effect Monster from your Graveyard and Special Summon it. Also, you can send 1 face-up Trap Card you control to the Graveyard to negate the activation of a Effect Card that targets a monster on the field and destroy it.


Black Knight - Assailant

[img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/2226/286672.jpg[/img]

Lore: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:
● Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand or from either player's Graveyard. When this card is removed from the field, destroy all Trap Cards on the Field.[/color][/font][/center]

[PshyKo]

Bump!

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Silfred: This card is actually UP'd, especially for a gemini. Geminis usually have powerful or semi-powerful effects because they have to be Normal Summoned twice. I would be kinda disappointed if my ace card would be destroyed by declaring an attack on my opponent's attack position monster. Perhaps when you attack your opponent's attack position monster inflict 500 points more damage and give it an effect that prohibits this card from direct attacks. Pic is good and the FX are sweet.

Hope: Also UP'd and some OCG errors. Give it 2500 ATK and an attack raise of 300 when attacked. Also, I would reword the effect to this: "...sent to the Graveyard you can discard 1 card from your hand to return 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-type Monster...". Also, I would rename him Yellow Knight since that is more his color and would fit more with Red, Blue, Green and Black.

Fury: I see some inspiration from Neo Spacian Glow Moss. Anyway, "when" should be "When" and this card is OP'd slightly, lower ATK to 1600 and DEF to 1800.

Life: Pic doesn't fit, try to find a better one. It is a decent pic but doesn't fit with the other knights. Also I would lower the DEF to 1000 because this guy is potent in an EARTH deck.

Gero: Needs a rename IMO, how about Tranquility? Also needs a new pic, more so than Life because Life is still a knight. Also the effect is OP'd, add a stipulation to that last effect that if it is activated that card cannot attack.

Assailant: A couple of small grammatical errors, and I would give him an ability to cut his attack power in half to attack directly, and then just reword the last effect so that it is just your traps. That would balance it out more.

Overall not bad, I like the idea and I would like to see more. Very very good for your first cards.

[PshyKo]

Thankss will work on it!

[.GhostRyder]

[b][size="2"]These are kinda good for a person at your standerd. FTW has said most of what I said. All I can say for advice is to look at other sets and this should help you give inspiration and ideas for new cards.
Keep it up![/size][/b]

[TCG warrior]

for Green Knight - Life, maybe better to make it's ATK 0, because as long as he's a normal monster he has 0 ATK and with a question mark there has to be an effect that increases the ATK which isn't there at that moment.

[PshyKo]

Lore: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster
with this effect:
[b]Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points for each EARTH attribute Monster in your Graveyard[/b]

LRN2READ

And thanks ghost!