[Renji] Mahou Yuurei

[CMRenji]

[center][b]I tried to make a Spirit Monster, and here it is. Image Credit goes to Jazin Kay's Archive.


[size="1"][[i]Name Translation: Mahou = Magic, Yuurei = Phantom. This may not be 100% accurate.[/i]][/size]

[img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/9420/mahouyuurei2.png[/img]

[i][color="#800080"]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. If this is the only face-up monster you control, this card can attack directly. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, you can add 1 Spell Card from your opponent's Graveyard to your hand.[/color][/i][/b][/center]

[Professor Cobra]

Change to 1000. I like to see a Spirit monster for once. 9/10

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

): Kinda OP. It's not hard to make this the only monster you control.

You can abuse this with Dark Hole.

Trigger Dark Hole, Summon this for a direct attack, return this and Dark Hole to your hand. Repeat. You've got game. You can also stock 2 to recycle Giant Trunade too for double protection.

The idea is awesome but it's just OP.

And 1000 is unnecessary. 850 is awesome ;3 low ATK Spirits rock!

[CMRenji]

[quote name='♥Łövëły Ċ.Ċ♥' timestamp='1285187795' post='4646225']
): Kinda OP. It's not hard to make this the only monster you control.

You can abuse this with Dark Hole.

Trigger Dark Hole, Summon this for a direct attack, return this and Dark Hole to your hand. Repeat. You've got game. You can also stock 2 to recycle Giant Trunade too for double protection.

The idea is awesome but it's just OP.

And 1000 is unnecessary. 850 is awesome ;3 low ATK Spirits rock!
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[b]I never thought of that. I would like to hear more opinions but if it is OP'd, I can try to change it to just being able to take a Spell from your opponent's Graveyard or something.

Thanks for the comment.[/b]

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Np. Or your could add that, when the spell you returned is used, it's RFP .-. that would be good. Then you'd have to either side or deck Burial from a Different Dimension

[CMRenji]

[b]Okay, I just edited it and it should be less OP'd now.[/b]

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

It can still be used the way I suggested though ):
There could be various other combinations as well.. But you're right it's less OP. But still OP. Like I said I'd be fine even with the either players graveyard bit if their removed after use.

But ;3 it's your card. You make it how you want ;D good card is good.

Never really got why people say ___ ___ is [u](Same word as the first blank)[/u]. It's redundant and kinda stupid .-. Yet I use it sometimes. It annoys meh ><

Also...
Renji sucks compared to Espada #8 and Grimmjaw
(both of which rock my sox off x3!!!)

[CMRenji]

[b]Thanks. I think I'm going to keep him like this, because I personally think he is pretty balanced(Not very balanced but not too OP'd.)

Anyway, thanks for the help with balancing it out. And I haven't seen the 2 you mentioned yet, but I'm sure Renji is 10x more epic than them. XD[/b]

[Y.M.R.creator]

I think it's good.
Too good.
If you look at the card graverobber,this card is a little overpowered because your opponent can never destroy it and every time you can return one spell card from your opponents graveyard to your hand if you inflict damage with it without any costs.I don't think it's balanced.
So I give it a 6/10

[CMRenji]

[quote name='Y.M.R.creator' timestamp='1285191946' post='4646407']
I think it's good.
Too good.
If you look at the card graverobber,this card is a little overpowered because your opponent can never destroy it and every time you can return one spell card from your opponents graveyard to your hand if you inflict damage with it without any costs.I don't think it's balanced.
So I give it a 6/10
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[b]Well, first off, I think Graverobber is UP'd. Secondly, it would be hard to inflict damage with this card(since his ATK is low) unless he is the only card you control and/or your opponent controls no monsters.

And, he is returned to your hand at the End Phase, so that puts you at a disadvantage. So I don't think he's OP'd. Spirit monsters tend to have slightly OP'd abilities anyway(since they are returned to your hand at the End Phase) so IMO, he's pretty balanced.[/b]

[Phantom M.C.]

its pretty good, you waste a normal summon on this, and carry the risk of a direct attack if you want its effect. but you get possibly a limited powerful spell in return. 9/10