John A. Zoidberg Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 A new set I'm making. I've decided that along with my parter up set with Deus, I'd also do this one. So, it is with great pleasure that I announce... Antediluvian Animalia (Ancient Animal)! Here we go: [spoiler=Plot] In modern day, we know of 5 kingdoms of living beings: Kingdom Animalia, the beasts, the insects, the men. Kingdom Plantae, the kingdom of trees and bushes alike. Kingdom Fungi, the kingdom of mushrooms, and other food absorbing creatures. Kingdom Protista, the kingdom of microscopic peacemakers and killers alike. And Kingdom Monera, the kingdom of unseen killers. But what those of modern day didn't know, was that there was a 6th kingdom... The kingdom of animal-like creatures. Creatures that fought using weapons of man, and strategies of gods. Creatures of a higher essence. These creatures thrived for thousands of years, until one day, they were sealed inside cards, never to be seen again. Though, they have just been discovered, and the Antediluvian Animalia are ready to take the world back.[/spoiler] [spoiler=How They Work] These cards focus on flooding your own field with monsters and your opponent taking damage when those monsters are destroyed. Pretty simple, but it can be very effective if you ask me.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Monsters- 1] [spoiler=Antediluvian Animalia Avianite][img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/28/227682r.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, inflict 700 points of damage to your opponents Life Points. If there is 1 or more "Antediluvian Animalia Avianite" in your hand when this card is destroyed, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon it to your field.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells- 1] [spoiler=The Antediluvian Battlefield][img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/5307/227682b.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 Could become overpowered. Potentially 1400 damage in one turn with that simple combo. Plus it's a good swarmer, doesn't summon from the Deck but it could Summon again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 Ehh, tad Oped...... Mabey lower the damage a bit Pic: ITS A DUCK! A AWESOME DUCK! Effect is pretty good but i dont get why your opponent is getting hurt.... dose the duck explode on them? Ocg is fine Overall 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 Best thing about it is you can attack your opponent yourself to deal damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SP0RE Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 God if the entire Archetype is like this, then I would run it! I can imagine the amount of power! I suggest changing the battlefields effect to increasing your Life Points by the same amount... Same LP Difference just less dangerous! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 [quote name='LiAM' timestamp='1285365104' post='4651495'] Could become overpowered.Potentially 1400 damage in one turn with that simple combo. Plus it's a good swarmer, doesn't summon from the Deck but it could Summon again. [/quote] True. Maybe add a usage restriction, like, for example, paying 500 LP? [quote name='Archwing' timestamp='1285365419' post='4651513'] Ehh, tad Oped...... Mabey lower the damage a bitPic: ITS A DUCK! A AWESOME DUCK!Effect is pretty good but i dont get why your opponent is getting hurt.... dose the duck explode on them?Ocg is fineOverall 8.5/10 [/quote] Yes, I can see the op'dness. Lolduck. It's just an effect. Doesn't necessarily have to be relevant to the pic. [quote name='LiAM' timestamp='1285365557' post='4651517'] Best thing about it is you can attack your opponent yourself to deal damage. [/quote] True. Maybe I should say something about the effect only being activated if it was destroyed by an opponents attacking monster or something? [quote name='Thunderpants' timestamp='1285365773' post='4651534'] God if the entire Archetype is like this, then I would run it!I can imagine the amount of power!I suggest changing the battlefields effect to increasing your Life Points by the same amount... Same LP Difference just less dangerous! [/quote] That would be godawful Op'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SP0RE Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 [quote name='Mecha Pedobear' timestamp='1285367029' post='4651591'] That would be godawful Op'd. [/quote] How about gaining 1/2 the amount you inflicted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 I don't know if you actually need to lower Avianite's attack because its effect is a less OP'd version of Giant Germ already, so it should have something over that. However, I don't know what the rest of the cards are so I don't know if it is OP'd or balanced yet as compared to the rest. The equip spell is pretty cool but it could be OP'd, especially over the course of the duel as damage accumulates. All in all I'm gonna save judgment for awhile so that I can get a feel for what kind of set this could turn out to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 The thing is, I don't want this set to have ANYTHING to do with increasing Life Points. I said in the "How it Works," that this set would be completely focused on reducing opponents LP.[quote name='FTW (For The Wynn)' timestamp='1285367645' post='4651630'] I don't know if you actually need to lower Avianite's attack because its effect is a less OP'd version of Giant Germ already, so it should have something over that. However, I don't know what the rest of the cards are so I don't know if it is OP'd or balanced yet as compared to the rest. The equip spell is pretty cool but it could be OP'd, especially over the course of the duel as damage accumulates. All in all I'm gonna save judgment for awhile so that I can get a feel for what kind of set this could turn out to be. [/quote] True. I may just scrap the spell and start anew. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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