chedbonlahor Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 My newest card. There are a lot of dragons floating about (excuse the pun) nowdays, here is a real old-fashioned dragon: [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/2235/217615b.jpg[/img] Decrease the ATK of this card by 400 x every card in your hand. If this card is the only card in your hand, you can Special Summon it to your side of the field. As long as this card exists in your hand, you must reveal your entire hand to your opponent. If this card exists in your hand, during your Battle Phase you can discard 1 card to enable this card to attack. If this card destroys a monster as a result of battle while it exists in your hand, the destroyed monster is returned to the top of the owner's Deck and you cannot draw during your next Draw Phase. If this card exists in your Graveyard, you can discard your entire hand to place this card in your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [quote name='BROOKLAN RAGE!' timestamp='1285374786' post='4651875'] 8/10 [/quote] Thanks for the exhausitve review lol JK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 You're trying too hard. Making it creative as possible but forgetting about everything else. It's not a bad card, and I guess I could say it's an ok card, but not as amazing as aimed for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 this card is not playable at all, too many drawbacks for a simple beatstick. the effect is creative but kinda random 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [quote name='¡Smesh!' timestamp='1285375074' post='4651892'] You're trying too hard. Making it creative as possible but forgetting about everything else. It's not a bad card, and I guess I could say it's a good card, but not as amazing as aimed for. [/quote] Smesh, I know by now you will never like anything that I make wether it's good or bad, I was just making a good card, I want thinking particularly outside the card I just wanted to make a good realistic card, I didn't opt for the creative as possiple option, but you have predicated me with that so I am trapped either way, so just do me a favour and don't comment on my stuff, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Why do you think I dislike you or something? It was a simple comment that you're trying too hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [quote name='Galadrien' timestamp='1285375287' post='4651907'] this card is not playable at all, too many drawbacks for a simple beatstick. the effect is creative but kinda random 6.5/10 [/quote] this Surprised your making chocalate....very interesting... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkest Hour Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 lolbadeffect Q/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [quote name='¡Smesh!' timestamp='1285375492' post='4651920'] Why do you think I dislike you or something? It was a simple comment that you're trying too hard. [/quote] I try hard because I want to improve, I have seen the great work of JoshIcy and others and I need to up my game. Before I continue I just wasnt to say that I am by no means big-headed, delusional, and egotistical, but I believe that there has been an incline in the standard of my card making, wheras I used to make crazy effects for the sake of, I have now tried to make my cards tactical and relevant to a duel-situation and in turn I tried to make a card you need to think about when using, the truth is, imagine using it in a duel situation and you will see its worth IMO. However my frustration with you is, it seems you always try and shoot me down at any occasion, maybe thats just my innate feelling, but its just the sentiment of animosity I get from you that you dont seem to project to others. If that is not the case then I am sorry, but I feel like that when you comment that I am simply banging my head on a brick wall.[quote name='Darkest Hour' timestamp='1285375742' post='4651932'] lolbadeffect Q/10. [/quote] Explain??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Ok it sure is random. Very, infact. And the effects don't flow. If this card is in your graveyard, do you realize that it will always come back to the field due to it's second and last effect? "If this card is the only card in your hand, you can Special Summon it to your side of the field." "If this card exists in your Graveyard, you can discard your entire hand to place this card in your hand." And it'll have 3000 ATK cause you have no more cards in your hands. This is a beat stick. Simply draw, discard, SS, BEAT DOWN, repeat..... " ?.10. Not sure how or what to rate it. No offense yo. -Dreamz- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [quote name='Phantasy Dreamz' timestamp='1285388078' post='4652419'] Ok it sure is random. Very, infact. And the effects don't flow. If this card is in your graveyard, do you realize that it will always come back to the field due to it's second and last effect? "If this card is the only card in your hand, you can Special Summon it to your side of the field." "If this card exists in your Graveyard, you can discard your entire hand to place this card in your hand." And it'll have 3000 ATK cause you have no more cards in your hands. This is a beat stick. Simply draw, discard, SS, BEAT DOWN, repeat..... " ?.10. Not sure how or what to rate it. No offense yo. -Dreamz- [/quote] Ye what you fail to spot is that you have the CHOICE to special summon it when it is the only card in your hand, hence "you can Special Summon it" so you simply cant say it will always come back to the field. Secondly, fair enough it's a very powerful using its Graveyard effect, but it's at the cost of your entire hand, so if it gets destroyed and it can be in a number of ways then you are in gig trouble, that is why you have to think whe you use it. Read my effect next time, again no offence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 i like it. kool art work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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