Phantom M.C. Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [center]A vanilla I made for Commander Tim's Plant Contest a while ago. [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/2461/245354hf.jpg[/img] Lore: [b]Strawberry boy is a freak of nature and a subject of hydroponic studies. He is the result of injecting steroids and a collection of other various chemicals into an ordinary fruit plant. Lemon Boy and Strawberry Boy have a lot in common, though Strawberry Boy isn't sour about life, in fact he thinks it's sweet, just like himself.[/b] enjoy the sweetness of this vanilla and strawberry? [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 You know me, I love my Vanillas, I think the description is a littled labored for my liking though, not bad though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Flavor text is all that unsupported vanillas have. Descriptive, but not funny enough. But I may be the only one who wants humor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [quote name='Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer' timestamp='1285376656' post='4651981'] Flavor text is all that unsupported vanillas have. Descriptive, but not funny enough. But I may be the only one who wants humor. [/quote] I think so, I prefer a vanilla to have a serious and telling description IMO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted September 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 wouldn't this card be a cross between humor and seriousness? didn't work as well as i thought : / Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [quote name='Galadrien' timestamp='1285376823' post='4651991'] wouldn't this card be a cross between humor and seriousness? didn't work as well as i thought : / [/quote] I struggles to see the humour but as I said it would work netter as a card with a serious description Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkest Hour Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Needs to be a lemon boy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 It even wears a convict stripe shirt. Lol. Jailbreak!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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