Literacy. Today, it becomes... Magic?

[Stillborn~Flame]

[size="4"][font="Courier New"][size="6"]H[/size]ere is my first couple. Yes. I did make literacy, magical. Enjoy my cards![/font]



[font="Courier New"][size="6"]C[/size]ard No. 1 ::


[img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/4480/288879r.jpg[/img]


Effect / Lore ::
If this card is Normal Summoned, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. If the card is a Spell Card, activate that card. If the card is a Trap Card, remove that card from play. If the the card is a Monster Card, you can set that monster in face-down Defense Position.




[size="6"]C[/size]ard No. 2 ::



[img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/7634/288879c.jpg[/img]


Effect / Lore ::
This card can only be equipped to "Literacy Magician". Increase the DEF of the monster equipped with this card by 900. If the monster equipped with this card is destroyed as a result of battle, remove from play the monster that destroyed the equipped card for 3 turns, then Special Summon that monster in face-up Attack Position. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to return this card to your hand. [/size][/font]

[Phantom M.C.]

OCG fix in[b] bold[/b]: If this card is Normal Summoned [b](You don't need Successfully)[/b], you [b]can[/b] draw [b]1[/b] card from your [b]D[/b]eck. If the card is a Spell Card, activate that card. If the card is a Trap Card, remove that card from play. If the the card is a Monster Card, you can summon that monster in [b](Face-up or Face-down? If its face-down, then change it to "you can Set that monster")[/b]Defense Position. ([b]Ignoring the[/b] Summoning conditions.)

the effect's pretty good, though i would really remove the "ignoring summoning conditions" part, it just makes this card op :/, other than that you get a 8/10

Ocg fix in [b]Bold: [/b]This card can only be equipped to "Literacy Magician". Increase the DEF of the monster equipped with this card by 900 [b](you don't need "points")[/b]. If the monster equipped with this card is destroyed as a result of battle, remove from play the [b]monster[/b] that destroyed the equipped card for 3 turns, [b]then Special Summon that monster in face-up Attack Position. When[/b] this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to return this card to your hand.

"remove from play the [b]monster[/b] that destroyed the equipped card for 3 turns," make it a permanent remove from play, and it'll be good. because it can only be equipped to 1 specific monster, you'll most likely have this card dead in your hand if you don't draw literacy magician. 7.5/10

keep up the good work

[Stillborn~Flame]

Thanks, Galadrien. I changed some of the stuff you told me too.

[black death1]

these cards seem weak and powerful which is a very good combination and i like your avatar

[Kuri]

Spam Above ^

OT: The cards are good (after the fix) They get 9/10

[DL]

Actually, there is a difference.

Normal Summon is one thing, you get the card either way. If it says Sucessfully, it means it cannot be like, trap holed to death, or you do not get the card.

Also, aside from a few OCG errors (If it is a Monster Card, you can Special Summon it, etc) I like it.

The pic for Literacy Magician is really good, and the picture for Literacy Globe is too.

The effects are creative, especially Magician's.

Nice job.

[Phantom M.C.]

[quote name='Dark Link 401' timestamp='1285468056' post='4655603']
Actually, there is a difference.

Normal Summon is one thing, you get the card either way. If it says Sucessfully, it means it cannot be like, trap holed to death, or you do not get the card.
[/quote]

actually, trap hole doesn't negate the summon, it only destroys the monster AFTER its summoned, so it still counts as successfully summoned. but if you respond with solemn judgment or something, the summon is negated, so the monster technically is never summoned to the field. so the word "successfully" is unneeded.

[DL]

I wouldn't call a monster dying a successful summon, but hey, I haven't been updated in OCG in forever, so whatevs.

I just remember that

Monster staying on the field: Successful summon

Monster destroyed after it gets on the field: Not sucessful

But...

Normal Summoned Sucessfuly is definitely not wrong, per se, right?