SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted January 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 [align=center] Dante, Hellchild Emperor When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, destroy all cards on your side of the field except for this card. This card gains one of the following effects according to the number of cards destroyed by it's own effect:- 1-3: This card is not destroyed as a result of battle.- 4-6: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell/Trap cards.- 7 or more: Increase this card's ATK by 2000 points.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 [align=center] Dante, Hellchild Emperor When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, destroy all cards on your side of the field except for this card. This card gains one of the following effects according to the number of cards destroyed by it's own effect:- 1-3: This card is not destroyed as a result of battle.- 4-6: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell/Trap cards.- 7 or more: Increase this card's ATK by 2000 points.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 This is almost perfect except for a few things :1. You should add bullet points, for choices in your effect.2. Try and raise the DEF Points just a tiny bit, since it's a level 7.3. For the third choice, isn't 2000 Points alot, even if there are 7 destroyed cards? It should be about 1000. Good job with the effect and the secret rare image. Keep up the excellent work! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 This is almost perfect except for a few things :1. You should add bullet points, for choices in your effect.2. Try and raise the DEF Points just a tiny bit, since it's a level 7.3. For the third choice, isn't 2000 Points alot, even if there are 7 destroyed cards? It should be about 1000. Good job with the effect and the secret rare image. Keep up the excellent work! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 8/10.... but a suggestion on my part> have in his text that he is also a warrior... might help with the theme a bit.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 8/10.... but a suggestion on my part> have in his text that he is also a warrior... might help with the theme a bit.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda_Cosgrove14 Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 creeps me out a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda_Cosgrove14 Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 creeps me out a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted January 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 1. I want to but I have no idea how!2. I guess I could do that.3. Considering that after you tribute him there can only be 8-9 cards on the field and their all destroyed no! that means you would have to have atleast 5 monsters and 4 spell/trap cards set. And in a regular deck if you set have that kind of field set up it's gonna be hard to keep it that way, and some of those cards could have been more useful than Dante himself later on in the game. Besides the only way someone would run this is if they had a deck based around his effect to get the last one or the second one. I wouldn't want to waste 7-9 cards just to get his third ability! But it's your opinion so I can't change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted January 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 1. I want to but I have no idea how!2. I guess I could do that.3. Considering that after you tribute him there can only be 8-9 cards on the field and their all destroyed no! that means you would have to have atleast 5 monsters and 4 spell/trap cards set. And in a regular deck if you set have that kind of field set up it's gonna be hard to keep it that way, and some of those cards could have been more useful than Dante himself later on in the game. Besides the only way someone would run this is if they had a deck based around his effect to get the last one or the second one. I wouldn't want to waste 7-9 cards just to get his third ability! But it's your opinion so I can't change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 Oh, I just realized that. Sorry, I didn't really think it over... :/For Opinion 1, just save the card onto paint ot something, and make a dark circle onto the dask that you put. And, you don't have to skip lines for each choice on your effect. I'm glad I helped! I hope you make more! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 Oh, I just realized that. Sorry, I didn't really think it over... :/For Opinion 1, just save the card onto paint ot something, and make a dark circle onto the dask that you put. And, you don't have to skip lines for each choice on your effect. I'm glad I helped! I hope you make more! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted January 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 Thanks Glasstin, and everyone else. Glasstin I swear you post in every single one of the threads I make. :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted January 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 Thanks Glasstin, and everyone else. Glasstin I swear you post in every single one of the threads I make. :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 Thanks Glasstin' date=' and everyone else. Glasstin I swear you post in every single one of the threads I make. :shock:[/size'] I appreciate that you recognize me. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 Thanks Glasstin' date=' and everyone else. Glasstin I swear you post in every single one of the threads I make. :shock:[/size'] I appreciate that you recognize me. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 [singsongy voice] The card says something different than the effect you wrote belowww! Can effects accumulate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 [singsongy voice] The card says something different than the effect you wrote belowww! Can effects accumulate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted January 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 No effects cannot accumlate. o_O I should have wrote that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted January 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 No effects cannot accumlate. o_O I should have wrote that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 lol yeah probably. Not bad though. But is it 1-3 and 4-6 or 1-4 and 5-6? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 lol yeah probably. Not bad though. But is it 1-3 and 4-6 or 1-4 and 5-6? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted January 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 1-3 4-6. Gotta edit what it says below.-Shini 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted January 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 1-3 4-6. Gotta edit what it says below.-Shini 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 Great Job Man! This card is Amazing.. Personally My Fav. Made By U. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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