Loreidan cards

[cRAGLE 62]

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Lore:
Whenever an opponents monster is destroyed by battle, place a Spell Counter on this card (max.12).
You can remove 3 Spell Counters from this card to draw a card.
You can remove 4 Spell Counters from this card. If you do, your opponent discards their hand and draws 2 cards.
Remove 6 Spell Counters from this card to negate the effects of any Spell, Trap or Monster Effect that destroys a card(s) on the field and destroy that card. Remove 12 Spell Counters from this card to destroy all cards your opponent controls.

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Lore:
You can discard this card from your hand to add 1 "The Ruins of Loreidan" from your Deck to your hand. If this card is face-up on the field, but "The Ruins of Loreidan" is not, destroy this card.

[Embittered Moon]

next time use bullets or something for a card with many effects. pics-5/10 Names-8/10 effects-8/10 OCG-7/10 overall 6/10. also i have a very good tip for you. Put a "LOre" section under cards that are hard 2 read, and then type out their effects there. People like lore sections.

[cRAGLE 62]

Klkl
I usually do put lore sections, but i was i a rush posting these cards cos i was on my way to a club. I spent a lot of time thinking them up

also, you gave me 7/10 for OCG. Could you point out the errors??

[Revatein]

I'll do that for you, friend.

[b]Correct OCG

[u]The Ruins of Loreidan[/u]

When a monster your opponent controls is destroyed by battle, place 1 Spell Counter on this card (max. 12). You can remove Spell Counters to activate this card's effects: ● Remove 3: Draw 1 card. ● Remove 4: Your opponent discards their hand and draws 2 cards. ● Remove 6: Negate the effect of a Spell, Trap, or Monster card, and destroy it. ● Remove 12: Destroy all cards your opponent controls.

[u]Ruins Defender[/u]

You can discard this card from your hand to add 1 "The Ruins of Loreidan" from your Deck to your hand. Destroy this card if "The Ruins of Loreidan" isn't face-up on the field.[/b]

I'm not sure about that second one...
I don't have much to say except good job, and try looking for higher quality pics.

[**_Xan_-_-_]

umm im wondering right here a spell counter is called a SPELL COUNTER and u say if a monster is destroyed it gets a SPELL COUNTER usally a card gets a SPELL COUNTER IF A SPELL IS USED