StealthyTyranitar Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 this is my first card im posting on realistic cards and it is supossed to be like swarm of scarabs[img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/9163/289079.jpg[/img]pleeze, all critics are welcome critisize this in any way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hexcalibrate Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 i think it should go: FLIP: Remove 1 monster on the field from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightGuardian1764 Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 You spell "Remove" to "Rzemove" but never mind that. Card: OK Effect: OK And you are bad at Grammar. I suggest English is not your favorite language. Right? As you a new member I'll rate 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Six Samz 500 Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 Really the car is quite boring and flips are too slow for the format. and picture isnt that good. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
button966 Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 [quote name='ultima master' timestamp='1285508665' post='4656699'] this is my first card im posting on realistic cards and it is supossed to be like swarm of scarabs [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/9163/289079.jpg[/img] pleeze, all critics are welcome critisize this in any way [/quote] It's a lot like Man-Eater Bug but with more ATK and DEF. That and it's effect is stronger... I'm not too sure but the effect might be OP'd... But then again... I wouldn't be too sure... (And if my internet was being fair, i'd have gotten this in earlier... ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 Snowman-eater has a lot more DEF so it's not that OP. Removing from play is a powerful effect anyway, cards like Fissure just destroy, but Karma Cut is a Trap and needs a discard. I suppose it's all fair, OP'd for Blackwing Decks though (if it's more important than Gale etc) it wouldn't be used in other powerful Meta so it can't really be abused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StealthyTyranitar Posted September 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 here is the not as messed up version [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/9163/289079.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Goveiz Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 [color="#2F4F4F"][b]I guess it's fine, but the effect is, in a way, a little over the top. You could change it to, [i]"FLIP: Select 1 card that your opponent controls and remove it from play for 3 turns."[/i]. Something like that. The image is more realistic looking other than a cartoon. Cartoon images are better for YGO cards. 8.1 / 10[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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