Gaze into the Vermilion Nova! A revolutionary set.

[Lord Smeagle]

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I saw this stuff in Jazin Kay's archive and I just had to make this archetype. It focuses around low-damage monsters dealing damage quickly and then detonating "Vermilion Nova" for the win. Meta, maybe? Maybe not.

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[i]If there is already a "Vermilion Nova" active when you activate this card, send this card to the Graveyard immediately and draw 1 card. When this card is activated, place 1 Vermilion Counter on it. Whenever a "Vermilion" monster inflicts Battle Damage, double the number of counters on this card. You can send this card to the Graveyard to inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each Vermilion Counter on this card when it was sent.[/i][/center]

[Venom]

Nice theme for the set, pal. I cannot help with OCG or balancing because im new here xD.

[O.B. Palomino]

Those are good cards. They activate their effects when there is a face-up "Vermillion Nova" Continous Spell Card on the field.
And, you need to correct the OCG in your cards, but it's not the big problem. Nice effects, i hope you can add more card with a variety of effects.

[Embittered Moon]

7.5/10 ocg not a problem, good job.

[Recteik Shade]

I see some OCG errors But what really jumps at me is these cards are great support for "Hamon Lord of Striking Thunder"

I'd say 7.3/10