Rise of Death

[StealthyTyranitar]

here is my card. please, if you see any flaws please point it out
[img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/9163/289079.jpg[/img]
Lore:Each turn you may summon one "Skeleton Token"(Dark/Level/4/ATK/1700/DEF/1500) onto your side of the field. These tokens cannot be sacrificed.When you can no longer summon anymore tokens this card is destroyed.When this card is destroyed you lose 1000 life points.

[**_Xan_-_-_]

not bad but thoese tokens are a over field of power 8/10

[chedbonlahor]

Considering your fairly new status it's not a bad card at all. The image and name are good, there are many OCG errors but the effect is well ballanced. I couldn't see myself using it, but thats's just me

[watthehell]

Nice card. 7/10 Few errors and the Skeleton Tokens are a little overpowered. try lowering the ATK and DEF.

[Revatein]

[b]Correct OCG (as far as I'm concerned):[/b]

[b]Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Skeleton Token" (Zombie-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1700/DEF 1500) to your side of the field. They cannot be Tributed. When you can no longer Special Summon "Skeleton Tokens", destroy this card, and inflict 1000 damage to your Life Points.[/b]

As the others stated, the "Skeleton Tokens" are a little too strong, but the drawback is very big. I personally don't think it's worth it, even with the somewhat OP Tokens. Try lowering down their ATK and DEF, and toning down the drawback. Pretty decent card.

[X-treme!]

A great card for an outstanding Zombie Set, i would so use in my set! 10'

[Lord Smeagle]

Where it says they can't be Sacrificed, it should also say they can't be used for a Synchro Summon, but elsewise it's reasonably balanced. I say...maybe drop the ATK to 1400, but you definitely need to print the Type of monster it is (I assume Zombie, but it isn't listed.)

[cRAGLE 62]

The correct OCG has already been said, but as others have also said, lower the ATK and DEF a bit, or you could keep the ATK and DEF and change the drawback to "When you can no longer Special Summon "Skeleton Tokens" detsroy this card, and all tokens Special Summoned by this card's effect, then inflict 1000 damage to your Life Points." Just my opinion, the card is great as it is! 8.5/10!