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You have a massive amount of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization errors on this plain card. This card needs lots of improvement, and the only thing that's close to good on this card is the picture. We're glad to see that's it's clear. Try not to spam, and if you need any help at all, or if you have any questions, feel free to private message me. :)

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You have a massive amount of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization errors on this plain card. This card needs lots of improvement, and the only thing that's close to good on this card is the picture. We're glad to see that's it's clear. Try not to spam, and if you need any help at all, or if you have any questions, feel free to private message me. :)

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Hmmm.... let me see, a 4-Star monster that is a fair beatdown monster and can summon a 3000-ATK monster at no cost to you. Let me suggest a fix.

 

Kaiba

6-Star

Warrior/Effect

When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned successfully, you may Special Summon 1 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" from your Hand, Deck, or Graveyard to your side of the field. The "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" Special Summoned by this effect has its original ATK raised to 4000. You must pay 500 Life Points to attack with said "Blue-Eyes White Dragon". At the End Phase of the turn that a "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" was Special Summoned by this card's effect, decrease your Life Points by an amount equal to the "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" Special Summoned by this card's effect's original ATK. If said "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.

ATK/1800 DEF/1000

 

There. Now it's not broken. In fact I'd say it's better than Cyber-Stein now that I patched it up.

Suppose it is a quasi-union monster I guess.

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Hmmm.... let me see, a 4-Star monster that is a fair beatdown monster and can summon a 3000-ATK monster at no cost to you. Let me suggest a fix.

 

Kaiba

6-Star

Warrior/Effect

When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned successfully, you may Special Summon 1 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" from your Hand, Deck, or Graveyard to your side of the field. The "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" Special Summoned by this effect has its original ATK raised to 4000. You must pay 500 Life Points to attack with said "Blue-Eyes White Dragon". At the End Phase of the turn that a "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" was Special Summoned by this card's effect, decrease your Life Points by an amount equal to the "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" Special Summoned by this card's effect's original ATK. If said "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.

ATK/1800 DEF/1000

 

There. Now it's not broken. In fact I'd say it's better than Cyber-Stein now that I patched it up.

Suppose it is a quasi-union monster I guess.

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