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White n Black wit a little Blood


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[size="5"][color="#FFFFFF"]White[/color][/size][size="2"] n[/size] [b][size="5"]Black [/size][/b] [font="Palatino Linotype"]wit a little [/font][color="#FF0000"][size="5"]Blood[/size][/color]

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[spoiler="Lore"]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster
When this card is successfully Synchro Summoned, place 1 Counter on it for each Monster Card you discard. This card loses 1 Star for each Counter placed (max 5). If this card is Summoned again after it is removed from the field, it is Summoned as a Normal Monster.[/spoiler]
[size="4"]Well?[/size] [size="4"][b]Feedback[/b][/size] [size="6"][color="#FF0000"]ne1[/color][/size]? [size="4"]
[u]HELP ME BY POSTING MORE LORE IDEAS FOR THIS CARD AND OTHERS!!!![/u][/size] thank you
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What's the point of the counters being there? There's no trigger effect for counters stated on the card. Also, the OCG is off. The correct OCG should be:
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster[b]s[/b]
When this card is successfully Synchro Summoned, place 1 [b]C[/b]ounter [b]on it[/b] for each Monster Card [b]you discard[/b]. If this card is in [b]Attack[/b] [b]P[/b]osition[b],[/b] it cannot be destroyed by battle.
As said above, the effect is a bit plain. Try adding a little more "spice" into the card. You can compare the name: Swords Master Musashi. Think of effects that would suit/fit this card. Perhaps add an effect which would allow it to attack multiple times (hence sword master; swiftness, etc.)
Anyways, take these ideas in mind, and add more exciting effects to this card. :D

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