Noble 6; It had to be done.

[King_of_lames]

[img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/3557/283071i.jpg[/img]

New, improved version (needs OCG check, though.):
[img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/2226/283071.jpg[/img]
Lore: When this card is successfully Summoned, place one 'Overshield token' on it. Whenever this card would be destroyed by a Spell, Trap, or Monster, remove one 'Overshield token' to negate the effect. Any Battle Damage is calculated as normal. During your Standby Phase, if there is no 'Overshield token' on this card, return it to your Hand.

[Makο]

Not bad, actually.


I like how you snuck in the mission description for "Lone Wolf"


His helmet is kinda awkward, considering that my helm was the Recon that I got from per-ordering. But it can't be helped.

[King_of_lames]

[quote name='Mako109' timestamp='1285610098' post='4661063']
Not bad, actually.


I like how you snuck in the mission description for "Lone Wolf"


His helmet is kinda awkward, considering that my helm was the Recon that I got from per-ordering. But it can't be helped.
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That's the default stuff if you don't pre-order (I wish I did..)
Thanks for the positive feedback

[//Zeromaru//]

Okay first things first. It's a vanilla and Six does so much damage to the Covenant that he deserves to be an effect monster.

Second, the text is very bland there is no story to. And to top that off its a quote from Kurt-051, and it isn't even regarding Six.

The pic though is good, you used the basic 'n' black Noble Six. I'm guessing you took it from Halopedia? Because the cropping is exactly the same as that one. I would have preffered one of him in a more action filled pose, but it is good none the less.

All in all I would say that no it did not have to be done. And if it did then you could have put some effort into it.

3/10

[King_of_lames]

[quote name='Alfius' timestamp='1285610425' post='4661088']
Okay first things first. It's a vanilla and Six does so much damage to the Covenant that he deserves to be an effect monster.

[b]Point taken, I'll do an effect version[/b]

Second, the text is very bland there is no story to. And to top that off its a quote from Kurt-051, and it isn't even regarding Six.

[b]You play as Noble 6 in Lone Wolf..I thought it was kinda fitting.[/b]

The pic though is good, you used the basic 'n' black Noble Six. I'm guessing you took it from Halopedia? Because the cropping is exactly the same as that one. I would have preffered one of him in a more action filled pose, but it is good none the less.

All in all I would say that no it did not have to be done. And if it did then you could have put some effort into it.

3/10
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[//Zeromaru//]

Sorry for being harsh, but I take my Halo kinda seriously.

I completley forgot about Lone Wolf. And yeh it is fitting, but its not long enough. Thats just a small quote if you make a vanilla then you've got to make the text have some substance.

[King_of_lames]

Update: Added new, effect version.


[quote name='Alfius' timestamp='1285610870' post='4661113']
Sorry for being harsh, but I take my Halo kinda seriously.

I completley forgot about Lone Wolf. And yeh it is fitting, but its not long enough. Thats just a small quote if you make a vanilla then you've got to make the text have some substance.
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Short and dramatic can be just as effective as a wall of text.

[//Zeromaru//]

Thats actualy quite a creative effect. Impressive actually.
The only mistake I can see is that you missed out effect after monster. I'm not the best at OCG though.

[s]3/10[/s] 8/10

[quote name='King_of_lames' timestamp='1285611049' post='4661121']Short and dramatic can be just as effective as a wall of text.[/quote]

True. But still that specific quote, I feel, is too short.

[Makο]

To be honest, that short quote feels 10x more fitting than anything larger.

[//Zeromaru//]

Yes but paraphrasing Doctor Halsey would have been better. And it would have been a direct aknowledgement of Six as opposed to a quote that is merely related.

[Makο]

Have you played Halo: Reach? Being such a Halo fan, you probably have. As I said before, the Last Mission, Lone Wolf, is that quote. Since this card is obviously directly related to Halo: Reach, it seems only fitting that he would use that quote. It gives a more dramatic affect.

In fact, that quote is so epic, I made it my member title. Yesh.
(Btw, have you beat the game on Legendary yet? I have. Hard as hell, but worth.)

[King_of_lames]

I'm sticking to what I said earlier about my short quote instead of a wall of text from the doctor.
The ending cut-scene was a very emotional ending to the Halo series, and is more fitting.

And thanks for the feedback, I tried to link the effect to the quote on the vanilla card (The concept of not dying), as well as the way Noble 6 dies in the game (The only way to kill the card is (with some exceptions >.<), outnumbering him.