HALO Card: Master Chief

[Jehy]

[center][b][color="#808080"][size="7"]Spartan 117: Master Chief[/size][/color][/b]


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[quote][b]You cannot activate this card's effect in the same turn it is Normal or Special Summoned Once per turn, you can pay 200 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Energy Shield Token" (EARTH/Machine-Type/Level 4/ATK 500/DEF/2000) in Defence Position to your side of the field. Increase this card's DEF by 300 x every "Energy Shield Token" you control. If all "Energy Shield Tokens" are destroyed as a result of battle in the same turn, this card is destroyed.[/b]
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[chedbonlahor]

You're new here so I'll go easy. The actuall skeletal structure of the card is well and good so you're ok there, however the way you put it into words has failed slightly, allow me to help.

The idea is:
-You get shield counters
-Shield counters increase its DEF
-If all shield counters are destroyed master chief is destroyed

The problem is (even though you said that shield counters are treated as monsters) you cannot attack a counter because they exist on the monster itself. The term you are Looking for is Token. Perhaps if you use Shield Tokens (EARTH/Machine-Type/Level 4/ATK 500/DEF/2000) that would work better.

You cannot activate this card's effect in the same turn it is Normal or Special Summoned Once per turn, you can pay 200 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Energy Shield Token" (EARTH/Machine-Type/Level 4/ATK 500/DEF/2000) in Defence Position to your side of the field. Increase this card's DEF by 300 x every "Energy Shield Token" you control". If all "Energy Shield Tokens" are destroyed as a result of battle in the same turn, this card is destroyed.

Hope that helps

[Jehy]

Thanks. I knew about tokens, but I was confused I made it late last night. My brain was in a blur then, so thanks again. I'll make sure I change it.

::EDIT::
Updated and changed.

[chedbonlahor]

[quote name='Jehy' timestamp='1285620267' post='4661557']
Thanks. I knew about tokens, but I was confused I made it late last night. My brain was in a blur then, so thanks again. I'll make sure I change it.
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I've written out the effect for you so can just use that, it's easy

[X-treme!]

Halo pwns all and so do I, FTW!!!!!!!!! 10'

[Jehy]

Spam much?

[jr junior]

This card is actually pretty useful! You can use the Energy Shield Tokens as Tribute for a Tribute Summon and they wont be destroyed by battle easily since they boast 2000 DEF and paying 200 Life Points just sorta balances everything else out. To top that, Master Chief can become a potential wall with 3200 DEF if you control 4 Energy Shield Tokens. Kudos to you for making an awesome card!

[cornholio2007]

The helmet looks a bit wierd and the 117 seems to be 1007 or something, well the whole picture is so messed up its unreal. but i like the effect, but it should say something like 'as long as there is a energy shield token on your side of the field, this card cannot be targeted for an attack'.