Ogre...at Another Card

[chedbonlahor]

My newest card, comment appreciated:

[img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/8571/217615j.jpg[/img]

This card cannot destroy a monster as a result of battle (Battle Damage is applied normally). You can discard 1 card to change the Battle Positions of all face-up monsters your opponent controls. If you control this face up card, during each of your End Phases offer 1 monster you control as a Tribute , if you do not, half the ATK of this card.

[Hound]

I personally think this card is UP. Every turn you have to Tribute 2 monsters? I don't know how those standards could be met without an "Ultimate Offering". It also can't destroy monsters, which is a bad thing in most cases. Try getting rid of the first effect, the last effect, and making it a Nomi monster.

[CMRenji]

[b]This card is very UP'd. I think that removing the last effect would make it balanced.

Everything else is pretty good though. the image is alright, the OCG is good. But IMO, it's just way too UP'd

But the effects are nice, and it seems like a cool card. 8.5/10[/b]

[chedbonlahor]

[quote name='Hound' timestamp='1285625933' post='4661829']
I personally think this card is UP. Every turn you have to Tribute 2 monsters? I don't know how those standards could be met without an "Ultimate Offering". It also can't destroy monsters, which is a bad thing in most cases. Try getting rid of the first effect, the last effect, and making it a Nomi monster.
[/quote]

You forget that tokens can be used for the tribute as well as monsters themselves. The thing with the first effect is that its attack is 3600 which itself is extremely powerful. You overlook the fact that not being able to destroy monsters by battle is actually a good thing coupled with its second effect, which changes the battle position of you opponents monsters. Overall I think the 2 tribute cost is fair.

I hope you understand that way of thinking.

[quote name='Lieutenant Renji' timestamp='1285626258' post='4661849']
[b]This card is very UP'd. I think that removing the last effect would make it balanced.

Everything else is pretty good though. the image is alright, the OCG is good. But IMO, it's just way too UP'd

But the effects are nice, and it seems like a cool card. 8.5/10[/b]
[/quote]

Do you believe that it is UP'd because of the second effect? If so I was thinking of having just the 1 tribute but honsestly I though that 2 would make it more ballanced with its high attack and other effect, perhaps not then

[CMRenji]

[b]You must Tribute 2 monsters to get it on the field, you must Tribute 2 monsters every turn or he will become fairly weak and monsters it attacks aren't destroyed. I don't think his hight ATK balances it out too well.

Maybe change discard 1 card to discard 2 or 3 and get rid of the Tribute 2 monsters a turn effect.[/b]

[chedbonlahor]

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