My first card that I made

[GreenDragonMoon]

[size="3"][font="Times New Roman"]I made my first card how abut that card.
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[img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/9008/290660.jpg[/img]


[size="5"][font="Times New Roman"]Kill all monster when it attack and can remove one card on the filed and you get 1000 points to life if you make attack and kill all the masters your opponent on the filed, if that card get to the graveyard you lose 2000 for turn. [/font][/size]

[NightGuardian1764]

Correct Card Lore:

[b]When this card attacks, destroys all monsters on the field. after Damage Calculation, remove from play 1 card on the field. Gain 1000 Life Points.[/b]

After that, I don't understand the effects.

8/10

[hexcalibrate]

i think he mean that:

When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, during the next End Phase this card's controller takes 2000 points of damage.

or something like that.

[GreenDragonMoon]

[quote name='king of dyspraxia' timestamp='1285671615' post='4663168']
i think he mean that:

When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, during the next End Phase this card's controller takes 2000 points of damage.

or something like that.
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When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, in the end of every your End Phase you get 2000 points of damage.

her the fix in my card

[img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/9008/290660.jpg[/img]

[NightGuardian1764]

Then it becomes,

[b]When this card attacks, destroys all monsters on the field. after Damage Calculation, remove from play 1 card on the field. Then you gain 1000 Life Points. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, during each of your End Phase, take 2000 points of Damage.[/b]

I don't know if this Oped or not but the last effect kill yourself. Prime Material Dragon says hi.

9.4/10

[GreenDragonMoon]

it kill all the monsters of the opponent and for god kill you get 1000 life points.

[HoneycombTroy]

When this card attacks a monster, destroy all monsters on the field and remove from play 1 card on the field. You gain 1000 Lifepoints when this card attacks and destroys all the monsters on the field. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, at the End Phase of your next turn, you lose 2000 Lifepoints.

Correct OCG. To OP'd. 6/10