some guy789 Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 This better...... [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/2016/278756.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by Tributing a face-up DARK Attribute monster and a face-up LIGHT Attribute monster you control. While this card is face-up on the field its Attribute is also treated as DARK. This card's original ATK is equal to the combined ATK of the monsters used to summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned successfully it gains the effects of one of the monsters used to Summon it until the End Phase. During your opponent's End Phase if this card is in the Graveyard and you control a face-up DARK Attribute monster and a face-up LIGHT Attribute monster, then you can pay 1000 life points to add this card to your hand. (This effect belongs after the summoning conditions). how 'bout this........ [img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/2016/278756.jpg[/img] 1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 or more Dark Monster(s) While this card is face-up on the field its Attribute is also treated as DARK. This card's original ATK is equal to the combined ATK of the monsters used to summon this card. During your main phaser you can tribute this card to add up to 3 counter trap cards from your graveyard to your hand. Hey heres another one.......... [img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/2016/278756.jpg[/img] While this card is face-up on the field it is treated as a LIGHT and DARK monster. Your opponent cannot negate the activation of counter traps. Each time you activate a counter trap decrease your life points by 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
button966 Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 But I know that Twilight is spelt wrong on the card. I know there are OCG errors but I'm not sure what they are. I guess I'd give it a... 5/10 I guess... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 All Caps Name = Big No No. Change it to Twilight Dragon. (There are only 2 cards in TCG that have all caps, NEX because it is an acronym and ZERO-MAX for no reason). Anyway, here's more correct OCG. Changes are in bold. [color=#474747][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2]This card cannot be [b]N[/b]ormal [b]S[/b]ummoned or [b]S[/b]et. This card can only be [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummoned from your hand by [b]T[/b]ributing [s]one[/s] [b]a[/b] face[b](-)[/b]up [s]'Dark'[/s] [b]DARK A[/b]ttribute [b]monster[/b] and [s]'Light'[/s] [b]a face-up LIGHT A[/b]ttribute monster [b]you control[/b]. [b]While this card is face-up on the field its Attribute is also treated as DARK.[/b] This card(')s original [s]attack[/s] [b]ATK [/b]is equal to the combined [s]attack[/s] [b]ATK [/b]of the monsters [s]you tributed[/s] [b]used [/b]to summon this card. [s](you can also have this monster use one of the effects of the monsters you used to summon this card until the end phase of that turn).[/s] [b]When this card is Special Summoned successfully it gains the effects of one of the monsters used to Summon it until the End Phase. [/b][s]If d[/s] [b]D[/b]uring your opponent(')s [b]E[/b]nd [b]P[/b]hase if this card is in the [b]G[/b]raveyard and you control a face(-)up [s]'Dark'[/s] [b]DARK A[/b]ttribute [b]monster[/b] and [s]'Light'[/s] [b]a face-up LIGHT A[/b]ttribute monster(,) then you can add this card to your hand. [s]This card while face up on the field can also be treated as a 'Dark' attribute monster[/s] (This effect belongs after the summoning conditions). [/size][/font][/color] [color=#474747][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2] [/size][/font][/color] [color=#474747][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2]The idea is there but it needs some work. Right now, even with the changes I made this card is OP'd (overpowered). It needs a cost to be brought back to the hand, such as pay 1000 life points. It isn't horrible, but it isn't the best.[/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
some guy789 Posted September 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 thnx ive been thinking about this card for months and couldent find a good pic 2nd im only 11 so my OGC isnt gonna be that good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 [quote name='some guy789' timestamp='1285782489' post='4666507'] thnx ive been thinking about this card for months and couldent find a good pic 2nd im only 11 so my OGC isnt gonna be that good [/quote] Age is what it is, what can you do? Anyway, for good pics, I use DeviantArt, Photobucket, Tinypic, Jazin Kay's profile (it has a link to his personal stash of amazing pics) and a few other sources that I don't devulge to anyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs Murray Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 Why is your title in Capitals? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
some guy789 Posted September 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 [quote name='button966' timestamp='1285780575' post='4666439'] But I know that Twilight is spelt wrong on the card. I know there are OCG errors but I'm not sure what they are. I guess I'd give it a... 5/10 I guess... [/quote] i get what your saying i need advice on the pic also Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
button966 Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 [quote name='some guy789' timestamp='1285791603' post='4666915'] i get what your saying i need advice on the pic also [/quote] Oh Yes, I forgot about that... Yeah, pic is pretty good, and with the changes to OCG, I'd now give it a 6/10... The Twilight Warrior is pretty good too. I'd say 6/10 also, maybe 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
some guy789 Posted September 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 well thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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