~Jay~ Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 [size="1"][center][b][img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/1889/235627.jpg[/img] The Fusion Material Monsters for this card are any 2 monsters with different Attributes. You can Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck by removing from play the appropriate Fusion Material Monsters. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Monster Card in your Graveyard to destroy 1 monster. If the destroyed monster shared the same Attribute as the removed monster, increase this card's ATK by 100. [img]http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/756/235627w.jpg[/img] The Fusion Material Monsters for this card are any 2 DARK monsters. You can Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck by removing from play the appropriate Fusion Material Monsters you control. Each time a monster is Special Summoned, decrease the ATK of all your opponent's monsters by 600. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can add this card to your Extra Deck instead of sending it to the Graveyard. [/b] [/center][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 The Cards effect is extremely creative i would have never thought that, this with future fusion and some marauding captains would make this card deadly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Engetsu Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 It's a okay card. It's easy to summon, and has a nice and simple destruction effect, although I find the 100 ATK increase unnecessary. Not much else to say about this card. The name is pretty meh, but I don't usually rate according to it (most of the time) 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Jay~ Posted September 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 I wanted it to be a monster almost all decks could use. The 100 ATK is just for shits and gigs :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.B X Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 Hi Lyssa, nice card. I could think of some better names for it but its good... Love the image Card OCG is good but not perfect am okay with that but others might not, so. 1/ You can Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck by [b]removing from play[/b] the appropriate Fusion Material Monsters. Removing them from play, yes but from where? Hand, Deck, Graveyard or Field. You must state clearly where will the Fusion Material Monsters are removed from. 2/ Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Monster Card in your Graveyard to [b]destroy 1 monster[/b]. Again, where is this destroyed monster, for all we know it could be in your hand or Deck You really should think it thru. 3/ If the destroyed monster shared the same Attribute as the removed monster, increase this card's ATK by 100. This part of the effect cant be anymore perfect. Only few minor OCG errors, which i will fix below. OCG Fix: The Fusion Material Monsters for this card are any 2 monsters with different Attributes. You can Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck by removing from play the appropriate Fusion Material Monsters from (Where ever you want). Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Monster Card in your Graveyard to destroy 1 monster on the field. If the destroyed monster shared the same Attribute as the removed monster, increase this card's ATK by 100 points. Alright, hope i helped and i think ill give this card a rating of: 8/10. Keep it up Oh! and before i forget, can you please go review my cards they're just next door.. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/223580-mb-x-the-sun-and-the-moon-have-spirits/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 Hmm, i would have thought you would use a pic like that for your crystal monster things Anyway Name:okay Pic: Great Effect: I like it, works with everything pretty much.... and its not a synchro! YAY!!!!!! OCG looks good Sorry for the short review =/ Overall 8.5/10 ~ and a rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomisntblue Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 The name is bland. Not a big deal in the overall rating, but something more exciting than being would have been nice. I'm not going to talk about your OCG, mostly because I'm not great with it. But I do find the first sentence somewhat awkward. I'm in love with that picture (not literally, as that would be a one sided romance) The effect is simply yet very creative and useful. I like the 100 ATK boost. It wouldn't be much at first, but after enough turns (if this monster lasted that is) it would start to be harder to contend with. I'm gonna say 8/10 Also I'd like to note that this is the first card I've rated since coming back to this site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Jay~ Posted September 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 [quote name='M.B X' timestamp='1285821894' post='4668247'] Hi Lyssa, nice card. I could think of some better names for it but its good... Love the image Card OCG is good but not perfect am okay with that but others might not, so. 1/ You can Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck by [b]removing from play[/b] the appropriate Fusion Material Monsters. Removing them from play, yes but from where? Hand, Deck, Graveyard or Field. You must state clearly where will the Fusion Material Monsters are removed from. 2/ Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Monster Card in your Graveyard to [b]destroy 1 monster[/b]. Again, where is this destroyed monster, for all we know it could be in your hand or Deck You really should think it thru. 3/ If the destroyed monster shared the same Attribute as the removed monster, increase this card's ATK by 100. This part of the effect cant be anymore perfect. Only few minor OCG errors, which i will fix below. OCG Fix: The Fusion Material Monsters for this card are any 2 monsters with different Attributes. You can Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck by removing from play the appropriate Fusion Material Monsters from (Where ever you want). Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Monster Card in your Graveyard to destroy 1 monster on the field. If the destroyed monster shared the same Attribute as the removed monster, increase this card's ATK by 100 points. Alright, hope i helped and i think ill give this card a rating of: 8/10. Keep it up Oh! and before i forget, can you please go review my cards they're just next door.. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/223580-mb-x-the-sun-and-the-moon-have-spirits/ [/quote] Yeah I noticed that too after I posted it, it's suppose to be on the field. I plan on making Fusion Monsters that act much like Synchros in terms of Summoning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomisntblue Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 They new card is awesome. The only thing about the effect is, and this could just be me not being up to date with current OCG, does it reduce their ATK for the turn or permanently? But very good and awesome pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Jay~ Posted October 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 It is decreased permanently. Since it doesn't state that it goes away it becomes permanent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomisntblue Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 [quote name='~Jay~' timestamp='1285897157' post='4670183'] It is decreased permanently. Since it doesn't state that it goes away it becomes permanent. [/quote] Okay, thanks. Like I said it was most likely my own misunderstanding due to being away from the game and the site for so long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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